Lyrics... :)

[Amelie]

Hello, i'm creating lyrics... i love the Alizee's song "Lui" ou "Toi" and i wanted to create english lyrics of this song...so, here is my try:

“You” or “He”

“You” or “He”
When I am in dawn
In the life
So cold...

“You” or “He”
I love his nice voice
In the life
No ice

You are so cold
And he is in the rest
He is my love
And you are in the mist, I know

He’s mysterious
In the Universe
Passing my life, I would love
I’m in...

Ch.: Love, in my heart will be fog
I am in the desert
I won’t be that alone...
“You” or “He”
I will be happy happy
In this world will be happy
To you I am singing
This song...

“You” or “He”
He is not my gold
Trough the life
My eyes...

“You” or “He”
When my soul is broken
Counting nights
My eyes...

He is so strong
And he is hurting me
My soul and your...
And you are in my wind, I feel

When I see your hands
I feel, that I love you
Please, take my hand
And come...
To the dark...

Ch.: Love, in my heart will be fog
In drops, in my tears
Just want to be alone
“You” or “He”...
This is tale about my life
In opened door you’ll see
Me, crying...


so..what do you think abou it? :)

[Luc]

Thanks for posting this Amelie !
What can I say, I'm dazed. It's amazing, very sensitive indeed :o

[Amelie]

thanks Luc can i post other my songs???:D :D :D

[Luc]

thanks Luc can i post other my songs???:D :D :D
Of course you can :D

[Amelie]

OK :D
it's one of my favourites:

Sexy sky

I see the dark welkin
Soon I’ll feel the water on my hair
The sense, I’ve found, darling
Is so fair

Shadows and thunder
My friends forever
I’m falling under
And be there ever

I’ve never heard...
So charming sounds
Oh, god, I’m scare
A lot of violet clouds


Ch.: He is blue
He is dark
Comme white glue
But too far
He is sexy
He is heavy
He is sky, doesn’t have any choice
Calling me
With thunder voice
With wind’s wail...
He is sexy
He is sky


I see the fair welkin
Soon I’ll feel sunshine on my face
The sense, I’ve found, darling
Is so nice

Sun and shine
My “je” and “elle”
Rainbow colour sky
Never cruelle


I’ve never felt
So softly wind
I’ve never dreamt
About this kiss...

[Luc]

Amazing :o I fully agree with your friend from Texas, it's very sensitive.
When are you going to sing it with Alizée ? Or with Mylène but I prefer if you sing it with Alizée :D

[Amelie]

Amazing :o I fully agree with your friend from Texas, it's very sensitive.
When are you going to sing it with Alizée ? Or with Mylène but I prefer if you sing it with Alizée :D

i prefer singing with Mylene, you know, she's my muse :o oooohhh, i really LOVE her, especially, now :o but Alizee is good choise too :)

[Amelie]

next (my friend's from Texas favourite)

Music box

Like an angel voice
Like a sun dance
Same with happiness
Same with forgetfulness
It’s a melody from my music box

Ch.: Call my name
Like crystal drop
Always the same
And I can’t stop

There is something I love
There is something I need
In the music box
In the music box
Is my fate

It’s the moment, I miss you
It’s the way, I go could go with you
Like a fleur, I have in my hand
Like a letter, I have sent
It’s a melody from my music box


Ch.: Call my name
Like a crystal drop
Always the same
And I can’t stop

There is something I love
There is something, I need
In the music box
In the music box
Is my fate..

[Luc]

Oh yes, Music box is very nice too. Personally I prefer Sexy sky though, but both are great :)
Why don't you sing your songs with Alizée AND Mylène ? New edition of Divas - Live :D

[nurvonic]

wow Amelie. you should be a music artist:)

[Moe]

you 2 stop it now :D its starting to get suspicious :D





jk

[Luc]

you 2 stop it now :D its starting to get specious :D




jk

specious :confused:

[NANAKI]

specious :confused:

meant suspicious

[Moe]

TYPO! < < is this right? lol

[NANAKI]

TYPO! < < is this right? lol

yes it is Moe good job :p :p :p :p

[nurvonic]

meant suspicious

lol yeah i was thinkin the same thing...are Luc and Amelie having an affair via the internet? lol

[aFrenchie]

Come on guys, don't unsettle them at this point ;)

[Twitch]

Are you guys jealous or something? But more important those were great Amelie, hopefully you'll be able to get your computer problems sorted out and record a chorus or two. :)

[Luc]

What a discussion about Amelie and me ;)
I am sincere when I say I like her paintings and her lyrics. I don't have any of her talents myself so I admire people who are that creative and imaginative.
Are you guys jealous or something? But more important those were great Amelie, hopefully you'll be able to get your computer problems sorted out and record a chorus or two. :)
I think they are jealous indeed :p

Amelie, there is this nice Free Hugs thread. I suggest you give the guys a big hug then they will be happy :D
And I also hope you will soon be able to record your songs or at least some parts of them so we can listen.

[Amelie]

really, lovely people here...you, guys, make me laugh :D yes, Luc, maybe i really should give them some hugs in that topic :D and thanks for those sweet comments about my lyrics... you have touched my heart

[Luc]

really, lovely people here...you, guys, make me laugh :D yes, Luc, maybe i really should give them some hugs in that topic :D and thanks for those sweet comments about my lyrics... you have touched my heart
Thanks Amelie :o Keep posting your work :)

[Amelie]

ok..just if you want... :o

Prayer from heart

Magic of night
So beautiful, so frail
Sun’s divide
I hear day’s wail...
Murders of days
Kill my day
Please, kill my day

Ch.: In front of sorrow
Sunset, red sky
No more shadows
Sail it away
Everything is by my feet
But I know , that i...
Am just a small stone in the sea.

Mystery, my memory
Telling secrets, so quietly
It’s not similar with cemetery
It’s like a love, I like it
Murders of days
Don’t kill my day
Please, don’t kill my day

In front of sorrow
Sunrise, red sky
No more shadows
Sail it away
Old life is by my feet
But I know , that i...
Am just a small stone in the sea.

( ) Don’t kill my day
Don’t kill my day
Don’t kill my day

This is a prayer...From heart.


Ch.: In front of shadow
Sunset, red sky
No more sorrow
Sail it away
Everything is by my feet
But I know , that i...
Am just a small stone in the sea.

This is a prayer...From heart.

[Luc]

You are so talented. What else can I say ? Again very beautiful :o

[Amelie]

You are so talented. What else can I say ? Again very beautiful :o

thanks again, Luc :o you're sweet :o

[Luc]

thanks again, Luc :o you're sweet :o
:o You're sweet too Amelie :o

[Amelie]

:o You're sweet too Amelie :o

ooh, this forum is full of sweet persons :o sweet sweet sweet, beautiful word...maybe i should write a song about this forum? :o

[Luc]

ooh, this forum is full of sweet persons :o sweet sweet sweet, beautiful word...maybe i should write a song about this forum? :o
That's a good idea, a song about the forum about our sweet Alizée :o

[Amelie]

That's a good idea, a song about the forum about our sweet Alizée :o

ooh...Alizee...you know very good, that if i write about famous person-first that person would be Mylene and just Mylene :D but maybe Alizee is second :)

[DJ_Greg]

Very nice lyrics, Amelie. I try to write songs, too. The only problem is I can't sing them (I can't really carry a tune :( ). I think I have about 14 songs, although not all of them are finished. I have to begin writing the musical accompaniment. I haven't learned the guitar yet, so they'll probably be all piano-based to start, at least until I learn my favorite instrument...

[Amelie]

Very nice lyrics, Amelie. I try to write songs, too. The only problem is I can't sing them (I can't really carry a tune :( ). I think I have about 14 songs, although not all of them are finished. I have to begin writing the musical accompaniment. I haven't learned the guitar yet, so they'll probably be all piano-based to start, at least until I learn my favorite instrument...

wow! maybe you want to post them? your lyrics? actually, i have 18 lyrics, but i have a problem with melodies! i just (today) created a melody for "Sexy sky" but...

I was loved...

Rainy day
Sitting near grey window
Freeze is caressing my skin
Want remember
That day, I pleased you to leave
Was December
You took me to the sky
But I ...
And then I fell to the hell
So why
You’re rending my contours? ...


Ch.: Fragile dreams
Fissure in your hands
Slivers injuring my soul
Bleeding inside
No place to hide
Our slashed love
Chill is flying above
You... Strewing my solitude
No, no, no more certitude


Can’t explain
This silly game between us
Can’t complain
Hailing down from your eyes
Eternity
Is talking about the particle of rest
Infinity
Our sweet kisses in the mist
Feeling airy
And effuse in our love collapse
It’s not easy
To commit my suicide...

[Quentin]

ooh, this forum is full of sweet persons :o sweet sweet sweet, beautiful word...maybe i should write a song about this forum? :o

And 1 bitter one... me. :mad:

[Luc]

Again very beautiful and sensitive Amelie. I can only repeat myself but it's true.

@ DJ_Greg : Maybe you want to post your lyrics too ? That would be interesting, especially if you also have an own style.

[neoteny]

i wrote a song about me, my wife, and my cat Ireland. wanna see...? lol

[Amelie]

i wrote a song about me, my wife, and my cat Ireland. wanna see...? lol

yes, i want :D show, if you can (and thanks Luc :) )

[Luc]

i wrote a song about me, my wife, and my cat Ireland. wanna see...? lol
I would like to see it too :)

[Amelie]

i have new song!

Of something to someone

The window is not open
The stars are broken
Learning to see the other side
When there is no place to die
Have to say “Thank you”
And have nothing to do
What can happen against the threshold
What we can see above our gold
Have to walk on the slivers
Have to feel all those shivers

Ch.: I know, that I will find the strength
To keep your hand in mine
To keep your hand in mine
To see our tears trough the black glass
Of bad times, they will pass

Trough the little window
Seeing our childhood, so slow...
Feelings, floating in my mind
And here are no stars to shine
In your dark eyes I can see
Slashed dreams, they’re hurting me
Hunting love, which girl have sold
Of something to someone, who taught...
Have to walk on the slivers
Have to feel all those shivers

[Luc]

It's splendid Amelie, I feel the shivers :o

[Amelie]

thaaaanks :D

[atra201]

Amelie good songs and plz don't stop
i like sexy sky .
how come I never saw an entire thread before :blink: :confused:
edit: bad cop, "what were you doing between the 24th of october and the 29th of october? confess and i'll go easy on you"
atra201 ,"I dont know ok ".

[Geech]

Yeah Amelie, sood stuff... Keep it coming...

[Amelie]

Yeah Amelie, sood stuff... Keep it coming...

if you want...

Twisting foam

The other force of this...
Sky in forbbiden land
That simple thing, I miss
We never could stand
Why we must do and forget
It was the best, I have ever met...

The hottest of my...heat
No more “we” they can’t keep
Oh possess me, read me...
You never did before, ea...
...sy, be gentle, be subtle...
Cause I don’t have time to live...

We do that and we don’t care
We do that and we don’t share
Bomb in bomb, crown on crown
Twisting foam, why drown...

And how to be a genious
Why people hate(s) us
Trying to ash a tender
Revenge of feminin gender
Could it be so cruel?..
No more sweet froth...

The hottest of my...heat
No more “we” they can’t keep
Oh possess me, read me...
You never did before, ea...
...sy, be gentle, be subtle...
Cause I don’t have time to live...

[lefty12357]

That's beautiful Amelie! I can't believe how talented everyone is on this forum. I've read some beautiful lyrics and poems, and I've seen some wonderful drawings, paintings and sigs. Alizée sure is a motivating force. I figured I might as well throw my two cents in and offer a song I wrote for Alizée. If you want to hear it, it should be at this link.
http://www.myspace.com/lefty12357

[Amelie]

thank you lefty and thanks for the link, i haven't time to check it yet, but i will :) and no doubt a lot of talented people here. or people who show their talents. because everybody are talented.

[Luc]

Beautiful lyrics Amelie ! Maybe you're right that everybody is talented, but some people are more talented than others :D

[Amelie]

well maybe yes Luc :D et merci ;)

[garçoncanadien]

Amélie tu as des nouvelles chansons à partager avec nous ? :D

[Simon A]

Cool lyrics, Very touching and well written!!

If its ok, i would like to share a rap text ive written along with a friend, we are acctuly recording it pretty soon "hopefully", Got beat and all to bad it's not possible to link that in the forum post,
These lyrics is acctuly written within one hour, the beat took alot longer time! This is our newest one. so it still needs to be edited! so feel free to post your opinion

The genré is rap, and is used with a quite slow beat, quite like Immortal technique if you ever heard them.

The text goes like this -

"my friends part"

Cold as ice..
my life is not a paradise.
living it cold as ice.
and after all these years ive struggled and fought through my tears.
ive faced all my fears but it still wont make sence,
still feels like im living between fence.
its like a thousand spears pierceing my chest.
but if i could only get eternal rest.
id avoid your pest. i know
life aint no test. but im not afraid of death,
cuz i cherish every breath i take. my life is not a fake.
the life on the streets aint easy as it seems.
we all have our dreams, but they wont come true.

"Simon part"
Cold as ice, i tell you the story of my life
sharing every piece in diffrent slice while you listen you roll the dice

cold as ice i hunt the mice for the next days rice gotta do what i gotta do else i gotta pay the price and thats not nice

life is volunteer, but happyiness is not, feels like we livin it up to a bot

and not for our own sake livin this fake and whatever we make is thrown to a lake to be forgotten

ille slice you another piece of my cake...

Cold as ice i run across this land waiting for something to show my fame

need something to blame. i know thats lame but its all the same doing it all just for the name
and when my day came and i pay back for the days i took and i start to look,
Thats how we become when nothings real, mental wound's never heal


Money drives people crazy
making people sing all along the same song
Baby if you could give me one chance
I would be now out in a dance.
thats how it goes,
and everybody knows,
Tonight is cold,
its raining outside.
i know the truth.
we cant free ourselves
all the tears inside,
turn them into life
is just a dream
and will be nothing but a livestream
Day after day.
Cold as ice We live in what we call paradise.
i havent felt it once, but twice
Cold as ice im willing to sacrifice.


(Ande part)
Cold as ice..
Cold as ice i tried to be nice, but still im wanted for every price,
Cold as ice i fought and shared my thoughts but more they brought
Cold as ice i run away from them lies,
Cold as ice we run with nothing but our selves
Cold as ice we hide like the elves


(Simon part)
Cold as ice..
Cold as ice we run through these war fields with broken shields
Cold as ice we fight to the end with no time to bend and no men to lend and no letters to send
Cold as ice, i run naked and bold with no weapons to fold and no memories to hold,
my love is sold, all i got left is cold and thats something ive always been told

- Simon A

[Amelie]

wow, that's very beautiful, Simon A you are very talented! i have new lyrics too but i am not sure if i should post them...if someone is still interested...

[Simon A]

I am !ALWAYS! interested Post post post!

[Amelie]

OK :D :D

i will edit this song many times i think so when i will have the final result, i'll post again...those, who saw "The Moulin Rouge" should understand the lyrics much better :)

Christian

There was a boy
Captured in his talent
Strange, magical boy
Now, he was at last...
He came to write
About truth, freedom, beauty...
About love...About me...

If i should die this moment
I would die with completeliness
With hurt, but without lament
The waters of forgetfulness
Will never take me away
I will be your wind, your shade
Broken and created happiness

How wonderful life was
Now you are on the earth
If i would feel like this
I would give you the oath
Give you my promise
I have my freedom, my lily
Forever...To love me...

[Simon A]

You are great, I can read the inner poetrist in your text ;)

[Simon A]

I usualy do freestyle poetry :D, Im currently listening to Teardrops by Massive attack,
This is the poetry i can write from it.

Teardrop

A tear drop
To make you stop.
Two tear drops for you to realise,
Three tear drops for you to hold me through my fear
Four tear drops for you to know what i have been through these years.
Five tear drops for you to say sorry
Six tear drops for you to know its over,
Seven tear drops for me to know its over,
Eight Tear drops to drop it all
Nine tear drops to make the last call,
Ten tear drops fallen while written the last words of my letter with the pen

This took about 2minutes.

[Amelie]

wow, Simon, it's impressive, i liked how you ended the lyrics, the last line, amazing, just simply.. :)

[Simon A]

Thank you Amelie, thank you alot ;D