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Moe
11-28-2006, 05:34 PM
Amazing!

It's not a story of beauty, although her beauty is a dilemma itself

Everything about her is natural and supernatural,
she is astonishing more than imaginations


Her kindness lies in the harshness of, her, staying away

Her laugh is the magnitude of her tiers

Her sprit is the sharpness of her knowledge;
she fills your mind with questions.

Amazing!
She is Amazing, she fills you with questions.
She is Amazing, she fills you with questions.

Is she real? Or is she just an imagination?

Is such a being possible or just impossible/unbelievable?

Is her easiness, hard to get or her complexity you think it's too easy to get?

Why every miracle in this universe is related to her?

Why everything about her you think you know it,
yet,you are not aware (ignorant) about.


And why is everything unbelievable about her, yet you still believe it…


Oh the beginnings of love! Oh the endings of absents!

This beauty, its creator is unfair! And so Fair!

Sweeter than wishes, a world of songs!
The most wonderful poems from the start to endings!

Why my existence didn't find to its coldness,
a warmth other than yours

Why my eyes see, and doesn't see other than your exquisiteness

You, the one more gorgeous than imaginations, this is the answer to the questions

So you'd be in my eyes, and from my tenderness, and only with me and not without me Amazing…


atra should know this poem :P

jeroh
11-28-2006, 07:18 PM
Exellent , Exellent

riva2model64
11-28-2006, 08:02 PM
very nice, moe!!

atra201
11-28-2006, 10:47 PM
Amazing!

It's not a story of beauty, although her beauty is a dilemma itself

Everything about her is natural and supernatural,
she is astonishing more than imaginations


Her kindness lies in the harshness of, her, staying away

Her laugh is the magnitude of her tiers

Her sprit is the sharpness of her knowledge;
she fills your mind with questions.

Amazing!
She is Amazing, she fills you with questions.
She is Amazing, she fills you with questions.

Is she real? Or is she just an imagination?

Is such a being possible or just impossible/unbelievable?

Is her easiness, hard to get or her complexity you think it's too easy to get?

Why every miracle in this universe is related to her?

Why everything about her you think you know it,
yet,you are not aware (ignorant) about.


And why is everything unbelievable about her, yet you still believe it…


Oh the beginnings of love! Oh the endings of absents!

This beauty, its creator is unfair! And so Fair!

Sweeter than wishes, a world of songs!
The most wonderful poems from the start to endings!

Why my existence didn't find to its coldness,
a warmth other than yours

Why my eyes see, and doesn't see other than your exquisiteness

You, the one more gorgeous than imaginations, this is the answer to the questions

So you'd be in my eyes, and from my tenderness, and only with me and not without me Amazing…


atra should know this poem :P

wow very amazing did u write it?
and i didn't know about it. :D

rwd716
11-28-2006, 10:57 PM
nice one! Woot 300!

C-4
11-29-2006, 10:25 AM
Quite expressive...and quite true!
Well done Moe.
Stephen

aditya8617
11-29-2006, 11:05 AM
Nice Moe. btw she is not for real. She has been totally inactive since I started to follow her whick makes me think she is just imaginary.

neoteny
11-29-2006, 01:07 PM
thats very nice moe

Amelie
11-29-2006, 01:14 PM
really, that's very nice, very nice...

nurvonic
11-29-2006, 02:29 PM
very nice Moe:)

NANAKI
11-29-2006, 02:31 PM
I love it great poem makes me think of the girl that I like at my school.

atra201
11-30-2006, 07:03 AM
not just nice it's amazing

rcs
11-30-2006, 07:40 AM
Way to go Moe. It's touching. :)

atra201
11-30-2006, 02:56 PM
when did you write this poem Moe ?

nate714
12-01-2006, 12:30 AM
lol.... I was so confused when I read that, I thought poam was a person's name, took me a minute to realize it was a poEm. sorry I'm not particularly fast to catch on sometimes.