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atra201
12-04-2006, 12:34 PM
Tell her : How much I love you moon face,
The gloss of my dreams.
My heart is flooded with emotions ,
that turned stone into diamond,
whispering:
I love you today,
I love tomorrow,
I love you for ever.

:wub: :wub: :wub:

Luc
12-04-2006, 01:14 PM
Don't be so modest, atra. Your poem is very nice and it describes perfectly our feelings about Alizée :)

neoteny
12-04-2006, 01:30 PM
a poem doesn't have to be long to be a good one. very nice atra202.

atra201
12-04-2006, 01:39 PM
Don't be so modest, atra. Your poem is very nice and it describes perfectly our feelings about Alizée :)

thank you, thank you, thank you.
indeed it does :wub:

atra201
12-04-2006, 01:41 PM
a poem doesn't have to be long to be a good one. very nice atra202.

thanks and i haven't reached 202 status yet. :D

Sir Wood
12-04-2006, 08:56 PM
thanks and i haven't reached 202 status yet. :D
That's funny. LOL.

Back to topic: At least you've the creativity to express your feelings and thoughts on pen-paper (okay on pixel-pixel). :)

atra201
12-05-2006, 10:56 AM
That's funny. LOL.

Back to topic: At least you've the creativity to express your feelings and thoughts on pen-paper (okay on pixel-pixel). :)

thanks and in both pen-paper and pixel-pixel. :D

atra201
12-05-2006, 10:58 AM
just hope the one person it is intended for to read this .

Señor Villa
12-10-2006, 05:10 PM
A Christmas song I wrote for Alizée.

Follow The Star

It's Christmas time and I'm outside.

I see the bright star in the sky.

Should I follow it, I must decide.

Heading to the east in search of you

The journey will be far but it's worth it that's why.

*Chorus*

Follow the star in search of you

The miles are many but I need to do

To find the promise one who will be the Queen of all Queens

You will bring peace, love, and what is true



Paris, France feeling the magic in the air.

The falling snow dances off my coat.

As I stare straight to the brillant light.

Seeing many already there, this will be a special night.

*Chorus*



Surrounded by many she starts to sing.

Everyone sighs in harmony.

From then on, the world will never be like it was.

She says merci to all that believe and came.

Alizée is her name.

Copyright © 2006 Sir Papa Productions

Twitch
12-10-2006, 06:56 PM
Nice :) Follow the Star, my first reaction when I saw that was to think of the song Suivre l'étoile. Although they are completely unrelated.

atra201
12-11-2006, 03:12 PM
I didn't write this poem Alizée but I feel that it applies to me.


I get wings to fly
Oh, I'm alive

When you call on me
When I hear you breathe
I get wings to fly
I feel that I'm alive

When you look at me
I can touch the sky
I know that I'm alive

When you bless the day
I just drift away
All my worries die
I'm glad that I'm alive

You've set my heart on fire
Filled me with love
Made me a man on clouds above

I couldn't get much higher
My spirit takes flight
Cause I'm alive

When you reach for me
Raising spirits high
God knows that
That I'll be the one
Standing by

Through good and through trying times

And it's only begun
I can't wait for the rest of my life (well I will wait for the rest of my life, if it takes)

When you call on me
When you reach for me
I get wings to fly
I feel that
I'm Alive

atra201
12-12-2006, 04:11 PM
Me and my longing for you, have a long night as you are away.
Me and my eye, are asking where is my precious (love ).
My eyes do not know any sleep, while you are away from me
Not a day , a month or even 100 days.
My heart is calling for you and my soul is flying to you
Time stands still, and I just wait to see your eyes.


(Please hurry up before I explode)

atra201
12-13-2006, 03:46 PM
I am searching for you with all the sadness of my heart, like a crazy I go around looking for you my lady.
I urge you to break my castles right now, to occupy my whole place and take care of me.
I was waiting for you to appear since the very moment I came to this world.
I want you to bring back together the scattered shreds of my life, I went around like crazy, tirelessly, incessantly yet hopelessly.
I hear your voice, I see your face and feel you in my eyes.
I long to meet you.
I am searching for you.

Matrix
12-13-2006, 04:18 PM
very nice poem Atra :)

atra201
12-14-2006, 10:01 PM
Tonight I had this strange feeling. I felt I was in love yet with no one to love. After the people I loved disappointed me, I decided to love for the sake of love. I thought it was safer and less risky. No more longing, no more confusion and no more grief! I feel my heart is a sky hosting the birds of my emotions. Tonight, my feelings were so different, even my poems were special. Yet your vision refuses to leave me. It has been more gentle and compassionate than you were. Where are you sweetheart? Why do you keep hiding from me? My heart was your home yet yours was my exile.


sorry to be late Alizee but i caught a cold and i feel better after an 8 hour sleep and a chicken soup.

Sir Wood
12-15-2006, 05:49 PM
Tonight I had this strange feeling. I felt I was in love yet with no one to love. After the people I loved disappointed me, I decided to love for the sake of love. I thought it was safer and less risky. No more longing, no more confusion and no more grief! I feel my heart is a sky hosting the birds of my emotions. Tonight, my feelings were so different, even my poems were special. Yet your vision refuses to leave me. It has been more gentle and compassionate than you were. Where are you sweetheart? Why do you keep hiding from me? My heart was your home yet yours was my exile.

Ooooh, story of my life... Nice one atra!

atra201
12-15-2006, 10:16 PM
May you always be my love, may I always be your love.
O my lady, if it were up to me i would have created a year especially for you.
You can style its days as you like, or lean back on its weeks as you like.
you can rest under the sun and dance and run on the sand of its months as you like.

May you always be my love, I say it to you in my special way, rejecting all the classical expressions that men keep saying to women, may you always be my love, my love.

I will not buy a tree this holiday. You will be my tree and I will decorate you with my wishes, my prayers and my tears.

atra201
12-15-2006, 11:51 PM
very nice poem Atra :)

Ooooh, story of my life... Nice one atra!

thanks guys.



:( :( :( no Alizee yet :( :( :(

atra201
12-16-2006, 10:20 PM
It is not your smile, neither the warmth of your hands,nor the softness of your words.
Imagine yourself before my eyes and between my hands but I didn't recognise you.
Your hand is so codl my love empty of emotions. Smile and laugh at me sweetheart, why am I by your side?
I am not used to seeing you reserved, rambling and sad.
Before, I only had to play with your hair to make you flush with passion and desire.

atra201
12-17-2006, 10:35 PM
Oh precious, I am so worried. Oh precious I am so tired.
Why did your heart forget me, and my time too.
I can not believe you are away, and I suffer in my days without you.
Where you my love?
Why did you leave me alone?

You are the meaning of my life,my existence, my love.
you are the joy of my life, my soul, and everything that I own.

Where do I turn after you? Oh precious.

neoteny
12-18-2006, 12:05 PM
You are the meaning of my life,my existence, my love.
you are the joy of my life, my soul, and everything that I own.

Where do I turn after you? Oh precious.

you turn to beer in times grievance. its very nice... and a very nice poem(s)

atra201
12-18-2006, 10:12 PM
The nights brought me back again, and renewed the love in my heart.
after she left, she came back and called for me and made my life start new.

Where were you? You who stole my love? Where were you? You whose heart I possess?

Your love, changed my entire outlook.
Your love keeps me awake and lulls me to sleep.

If you're away from me for a second, I miss you.
And I call for you through the hours.
Because of you, my life became joyful.

And with you, I regained my lost life.

rwd716
12-18-2006, 10:16 PM
Get that, Son! Great poems.

Sir Wood
12-19-2006, 01:08 AM
you turn to beer in times grievance. its very nice... and a very nice poem(s)
Yeah, to bad alcohol is a mood altering depressant drug. Then again, he's already depressed. :blink:

(Sorry for going off-topic.)

neoteny
12-19-2006, 02:41 PM
i wrote this a while back. it was right after a big fight. and yes...i feel comfortable enough to share with the members on this site. not ONE WORD nurv!

199

dont hurt your eyes trying to read it...:o

atra201
12-19-2006, 10:24 PM
Whoever wants the beautiful should do as commanded,my love can command and i'm at her service.
If for the beautiful I don't work?
if for love I don't torture myself?
if I don't have sleepless nights?
If i don't get mad and angry?
Then I would better stop loving her and just kill myself.
If you are affraid of everything, cannot even take one step
then flirt with birds.
shoot and face the shots, do not run away, for only the courageous shall know the true love.
Get mad but reconcile,be mysterious and clear, flirt.
Grab the opportunity of your love being by your side, open your heart to her and indulge in happiness as she takes you in her arms.

atra201
12-21-2006, 01:55 AM
I love you so much and I know that the road to the impossible is long.
I love you so much and I know that I travel in the ocean of your eyes, without a destination.
And I leave my mind behind me and run,
I run, I run back to my madness.
But I also know that you are the queen of women.
The queen of women, and no one can take your place.
I also know that the time of love has ended, and the beautiful words have died.

So to no other woman I say:
I love you so much, I love you so much.

I love you so much and I know you live in isolation, and I live in isolation.
And between you and I there is: wind and clouds and lightning and thunder and ice and fire.

And I know that reaching your eyes is an illusion.
And I know that reaching you would be suicide.
And it would make me happy, to tear myself to pieces for your sake, my precious one.

And if I had to choose, if I had to choose,
I would choose your love for the second time.

How many times did your likeness appear in the leaves of the trees?
How many times did I shower you with patience like drops of rain?

Oh woman, who holds my heart between her hands,

I asked you, by god, do not leave me!
No, no, no, no, don't leave me!
For what would I be without you?
I love you so much, so much, so much.
And I refuse to give up the fire of your love
For why would I wait to find love just to refuse it?
And I don't care if I escape from your love alive.
And I don't care if I escape dead!

neoteny
12-21-2006, 02:48 PM
Alizee i love you
i want you
i want you here in my home
i want you to here

Your eyes captivate
Your body stimulates
Your smile melts me
you dance like the wind

As i watch you
I open a cold one
As i watch you
I feel at rest
As i watch you
My agony disappears
As i watch you
You are the best

atra201
12-21-2006, 10:00 PM
No, don't you worry. Before long your smile will return,
And the fire in your chest will cool. No, don't you worry.

Oh I swear. There is no limits to my feelings.
I'm head over heels in love.
Every moment with you, I'm renewed. Don't you worry.

I recall that night I confessed my love.
Tears fell down your cheeks,
But I never meant for that. Don't you worry.

I <3 Zombies
12-22-2006, 12:45 AM
Wow Atra, your poetry is so beautiful and touching. Never hesitate to post it, because it is fully worth revealing.

rwd716
12-22-2006, 01:25 AM
Alizee i love you
i want you
i want you here in my home
i want you to here

Your eyes captivate
Your body stimulates
Your smile melts me
you dance like the wind

As i watch you
I open a cold one
As i watch you
I feel at rest
As i watch you
My agony disappears
As i watch you
You are the best

I open a cold one, lol, good game/qq more!

And Atra, man you just keep pumping those babies out, amazing.

atra201
12-22-2006, 10:44 PM
My entreaties died in the caverns of your eyes.
And my flags surrendered to the winds of despair.
My days escaped to find your door closed.
And what transpired with the object of my cries?

Four years and she didn't hear the melody of my strings...
And she didn't see the light of my sky.
I freed the love in my heart and squeezed it...Then I drank grief
From a dirty chalice.

And I became torn. I had no prestige or luxury to tempt you with.
So then leave me with my grief ..

If you squeeze the years of my life completely,
The blood from my wounds would flow.
If I had riches, you would not have refused my love.
But I am in a state of difficulty, a state of poverty, a state of weakness.

I suffered... I suffered
But I do not reveal my sorrow, and you did not know a thing about my suffering .
I walk and smile, because I'm stubborn.
So I hide from the people, my approaching death.
For if they knew what is the matter, they would try to console me.
And I knew that they could not.

Deprivation rests upon my brow and sucks my blood.
And only he can allow me to smile.
You are forgiven for aborting my hopes.
The fault is not yours; it was my foolishness.

I wasted my procession in the desert.
And I came, looking for myself in your eyes.
And I came, looking for happiness in your embrace.
Like a child, I formed my innocent dreams.
And you planted your palms and uprooted my veins.
And you are planted without the kindness of my pleasures.

And she emigrated...
My lost cities emigrated away from me
And my sails never left her.

I was exiled and the strangers settled in my country
And they destroyed all my beloved things.
Your eyes betrayed you.
With forgery and lying.
Your confusion decieved you.
My lady.

I came as a butterfly to place within your hands, the colors of my wings.
Then injustice burned my wings.
I screamed while the sword was implanted in my chest.
And the betrayal destroyed my huge hopes.
And you also, I perished on your hands.
I perished from your hands.
Because you preferred my murder and loved the sound of my groans.

And so I deleted your precious name from my languages.

atra201
12-23-2006, 10:21 PM
I'm the one who loves you the most.
In the whole world, and I'll love you forever.
And in your suffering, and your joy, I am beside you.
I swear, I would give my life for your sake.

I'm the one whose heart feels for you the most.
I am your world, I am your servant.
You are the one, from the midst of all people,
That I'm hooked on and am thinking of.

My darling, come close, look with your own eyes.
I'm right next to you, I'm surrounding you.
Because for your eyes, my life isn't enough.
My darling, it's not enough nor is it too much for you.

atra201
12-23-2006, 10:23 PM
Atra, man you just keep pumping those babies out, amazing.

thanks a lot my friend

atra201
01-06-2007, 02:31 PM
Hello Alizée and all
i'm sorry to be so late on you but i was in the hospital for treatment
and now back to our topic hope you'll like it

atra201
01-06-2007, 02:35 PM
From the moment we met, you and I
There is something strange
That changed my life and started making my days lovelier
My eyes no longer see anyone but you before me

Suddenly, what I felt
I was overwhelmed
And it came true, what I've been dreaming of for so long
Hold me and take me with your eyes
I can't stand living a minute without you

Come closer to me
Don't deny me your love
be concerned for me
protect me and draw me closer
come closer to me

I never imagined in all my life, there would be a person
whoever she might be
that a word from her can make me stay up nights
and when she is away from me her voice remains on my mind

Zack -Alizee Lover-
01-06-2007, 02:57 PM
what happened atra?

Luc
01-06-2007, 03:15 PM
Hello Alizée and all
i'm sorry to be so late on you but i was in the hospital for treatment
and now back to our topic hope you'll like it
Good to have you back Atra. I’m sorry you had to go to the hospital, I sincerely hope you are alright now. I like your contributions to the forum very much :)

CFHollister
01-06-2007, 05:33 PM
I was wondering where you went, atra.

neoteny
01-06-2007, 10:29 PM
welcome back Edgar Allen Poe. feel better? nice poem.

atra201
01-06-2007, 10:31 PM
what happened atra?

nothing serious just a headache.
thank you and happy surfing.
Good to have you back Atra. I’m sorry you had to go to the hospital, I sincerely hope you are alright now. I like your contributions to the forum very much :)
I'm better now thanks
I was wondering where you went, atra.

consider it a vacation.

deliciouis to hear the both of you

atra201
01-06-2007, 10:51 PM
ok yesterday i couldn't sleep so here is something new

atra201
01-06-2007, 10:52 PM
If we were to tell the story,
Where would we begin the tale?
The story of our love.
Has much more than a beginning.

We've lived within it,

But we walked,
And completed the journey of love,
And we've arrived.

And the world couldn't make us argue.
Or separate us or drive us apart.

Come, let's go,
To tell everyone, you and I,
How we were able.

To escape from all grief.
And live forever in love.

And embrace our joy,
Together, and let our love, stay young.

And we met, you an I,
In our journey, many things
That wounded others.

Jealousy, and it's worries,
And what happens as a result.


The day it came close to us,
It was driven away by our love.

And we met the evil eyed,
And they saw us.
And never once did they think
To leave us alone.

And they talked about us,
My how they talked about us.
But our love,
Never changed at all.


And you'd travel, and I'd travel.
Many times, we would travel.
And our hearts would meet,
With every rising of the moon.

And if our paths
Drove us apart,
The beauty of love,
Would bring us together.

And who can make us argue?
Who can break us apart?
And who can make us argue?
Who can break us apart?

Between our hearts.
There's a meeting every moment.

And suddenly we stopped.
And our fear began.
And we found around us,
The world dark as night,
And wounded hearts.

Like the leaves of trees,
In the season of fall,
Thrown by the wind,

We asked our souls why.
What is greater than our love?

But our fear couldn't reach us.
And we knew it,
And we saw it,
And we felt it.

You see that love is just,
Glances, and touches,
But I see that,
The most beautiful words,
Of lovers, my darling,
Is the words comprised of lips.

You who are next to me
Every second,
But tries to flee,
Regardless of my words.

And I see,
That our love is
Weakened by a touch of the hand.

You say you're scared,
Let's leave and be apart,
Because the passion is great,
It may trick us both.
What are you afraid of?
What is there more beautiful ?
Than the embrace of our love
To keep us warm.

And then you say, look at the moon.
And so I look at the moon.

That every lover
Forgets the nights, within it.

Beautiful, the moon is beautiful.

The moon is beautiful, But,
What's more beautiful than the moon?
If we allow our lives
To one day taste the beauty of love.

And our fear was defeated,
After we paused.

And with our heartbeats,
We knew together.
And we lived a life of love.
In fantasy, fantasy,
Fantasy and reality,
And reality together.

Sir Wood
01-07-2007, 07:26 PM
Glad you're back and feeling better!

Oh no! You need to repost something and move away from that triple 6 post count number of yours. :eek:

nishaan7
01-07-2007, 07:30 PM
senor ur not really 6, and how many diffrent forums are u on

atra201
01-07-2007, 11:26 PM
Glad you're back and feeling better!

Oh no! You need to repost something and move away from that triple 6 post count number of yours. :eek:
i didn't know i had it but i don't care.
senor ur not really 6, and how many diffrent forums are u on
i'm in alot of forums but only active here.

atra201
01-07-2007, 11:41 PM
Wandering,
And walking through the lands, wandering.
And the distance between me
And my beloved is vast.

It's a long journey,
And in it, I'm a stranger.
And the night draws near,
And the sun has returned to it's home.

If you find my love,
Greet him for me.

Reassure me about my love,
What has the separation done to her.

Wandering,
I walk through the nights, wandering.
With no control over myself, wandering.
From our separation, my love, wandering.
What has happened to me?

And for years,
I've fallen in love with her.
I just want to know which path leads to her.

If you find my love,
Greet her for me.

My eyes!
Oh my eyes, what has happened to you?
Where are you and what are you doing?
My worries,
Oh my worries, leave me alone.
I'm worried enough about her.

I can't find rest,
And I'm lost, wandering.

Oh moon, you who has forgotten me.
Show me the way to the lost one.
Light the way, and show me
The path of my beloved.

You have promised me,
You who bears witness for me.

Tell her all that is within me,
And how I'm tortured every night. Wandering

atra201
01-08-2007, 11:13 PM
I'm the one who always believed in the idea of patience in times of trouble.
And I am the one who always said that love lives long.
Since love had taken us both so much,
And since the beauty of the world was ours.
We never thought that it would spite us.
Or that the days would separate us.
And we lived in love, day by day.
And tomorrow was always a dream.
And, no wonder, it was all an illusion.
And she left without saying goodbye.
She wounded my heart,
I stayed up many nights,
And my eyes never found rest.
And where can we find the patience that will cure us?
He who was beaten by love before us should tell us!

My darling,
I swear, you're still my darling.
I swear, even if you've forgotten me.
I swear, I can never forget my darling.
Can you try to remember me?
Try to remember me.
If you walk on a path that we once walked upon.
Or pass by a place that we shared a memory in.
Can you try to remember me?
Try to remember me.
These nights we lived,
I can never forget.
They stay on my mind, my darling.
On my mind, day and night, my darling.
On my mind as the sun rises and sets.
And you, too, stay on my mind.

We split up but why? And we suffered.
Tell me why? Tell me, tell me.
Because of doubt, my darling?
From the things people said of me.
Because of jealousy, my darling?
See what jealousy has done to me?
My darling, no matter how long I yearn.
I will still call you "My Darling".

Our separation all those nights caused me so much pain.
I stayed up longing, Yearning deprived my every night.
So many days were lost, my god!
Suffering and in pain, staying up with no sleep.
I spent the nights, with the moon and the stars. And we spoke much.
I spoke much of you. Trying to find a reason why you left.
Please swear to me now.
Can you try to remember me?
Try to remember me.

Come,
Let the sun and our smile, Rise and fill our world with light.
Come,
Why should we say separation is imminent? When love is in front of our eyes?
Why submit to heartbreak and say we were cheated? Why say we were cheated?
Come,
Let the world see our joy.
Let the world tell our tale.
Come,
Oh you who are far away from me, I wish one day you'd hear my cry.
And if you can't come to me again.
And if you've forgotten my past and forgotten my place.
Can you try to remember me?
Try to remember me.

CFHollister
01-09-2007, 04:01 AM
I'm the one who always believed in the idea of patience in times of trouble...

I like this poem very much. I'm not gonna say any more.

atra201
01-09-2007, 12:18 PM
I like this poem very much. I'm not gonna say any more.

thank you i love it too a punch

atra201
01-09-2007, 11:42 PM
Tell me something, anything.
Say you love me,
Or say you hate me.

Speak and don't worry about a thing.
Say that you want me.
Or what has brought you here?
Just say anything,
Anything my darling.

I never got used to
Having you with me,
And having you worry by yourself.


Never. We have become One heart
That beats for you and for me.

And oh my heart,
Oh my life,
Tell me what's wrong?
Why are you quiet?
Why?

Speak my heart,
Speak my life,
Tell me what are you hiding from me?
What?

Just say anything,
Anything my darling.

If you feel I have wronged you,
Tell the world and blame me.
And if you find that you were to blame,
I will still gladly take it.
I will still gladly take it.
Gladly.


Speak my heart,
Speak my life,
Tell me what are you hiding from me?

Tell me something, anything.
Tell me something, anything.
Say you love me,
Or say you hate me.

Every word, every touch,
My soul always keeps it for you.
Every tear, every joy,
I always run to tell you about it.

Speak, speak.
Speak and don't worry about a thing.
Say that you want me.
Or what has brought you here?
Just say anything,
Anything my darling.

atra201
01-10-2007, 10:37 PM
Amazing.
Her style was amazing.
Her style was amazing.

Her smile tricked me,
And her tears fooled me.
And her tears fooled me.

And I would have never believed
Before this day,
That my feelings,
Until now, would stay.

I knew her,
As much as I knew her,
But I didn't know her at all.

And I saw her,
As much as I saw her,
But I didn't understand her at all.

She used to say she loved me,
Yes, she used to say.
And from my unwary heart,
I believed, believed her right away.

I used to see, hear,
And feel her heart.
I was living, not for me.
But only for her.

Oh you who taught me love,
I wish I never learned it with you,
Or even saw it.

Why have you left me?
Did you let me forget the world,
And live in your beauty.

There was not another pair like us.
That saw what we saw in our love.

We used to begin our dreams,
Then complete them from each other.

Why did you wake me
From amidst heaven
To fire, fire and tears.

You should have had mercy
And leave me a while
To live, live asleep.

My heart, tell love to
Get out of my way.

If I befriend a loyal heart,
I won't trust it or nourish it.
And if she smiles at me I'll laugh.
And trick her and maybe betray her.

Like others have sold us out,
Let's sell out the life of love,
And it's promise.

Like my heart was lost,
Let all of the worlds hearts be lost,
After mine.

Or on second thought,
No, my heart.
Why should we blame love?

He who betrayed you,
Betrayed love as well.

So I, and love and you,
Were just a game,
Just a game between her hands.
:(

Canuck
01-10-2007, 11:35 PM
i wrote one as well

The sky on a perfect day is nothing compared to what I see in her eyes,
As I fall helplessly into a comforting, warm trance every time I look into them.
Neither sunsets or sunrises can compare to how beautiful she is,
and all the stars in the night sky could never twinkle as bright as her smile.
but its that smile that takes me to the clearest state of mind,
but it seems I find myself lost in my thoughts.
You illuminate my universe….

atra201
01-11-2007, 01:25 AM
i wrote one as well

The sky on a perfect day is nothing compared to what I see in her eyes,
As I fall helplessly into a comforting, warm trance every time I look into them.
Neither sunsets or sunrises can compare to how beautiful she is,
and all the stars in the night sky could never twinkle as bright as her smile.
but its that smile that takes me to the clearest state of mind,
but it seems I find myself lost in my thoughts.
You illuminate my universe….

well said She illuminates our universe

aliquis_venum
01-11-2007, 02:01 AM
This song is composed by one of my country's most popular balladeer. I dedicate this song to Alizee :wub: -

YOU ARE MY SONG

You are the song
Playing so softly in my heart
I reach for you
You seem so near
And yet so far
I hope and I pray
You'll be with me someday
I know down inside
That you are mine & I'm your true love
Or am I dreaming...

How can I
Each time I try to say goodbye
You were there
You look my way and touch the sky
We can share tomorrow and forevermore
I'll be there
To love you so
You are my song

I know for sure
That we were meant to fall in love
I look in your eyes
I know what you're thinking of
I try not to say
The words that might just scare you away
I know down inside
That you are mine & I'm your true love
Please, no more dreaming...

How can I
Each time I try to say goodbye
You were there
You look my way and touch the sky
We can share tomorrow and forevermore
I'll be there
To love you so
You are my song

Maybe we can last until forever
And I know that we can make it through
With you in my heart, in my soul, you're my love
You're my song

You are my song

We can share tomorrow and forevermore
I'll be there
To love you so
You are my song


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CFHollister
01-11-2007, 02:30 AM
aliquis_venum, please use normal sized text... huge pet peeve of mine.

atra201
01-13-2007, 01:22 AM
In return for the love that you see in my eyes,
Greet me, oh beautiful one.
How many times do my eyes ask for you?
How many times am I tortured?

I'm afraid you'd listen to gossip and I'd be lost.
I show others the way to heaven, but I'm in fire.

You are precious to me and you've made me crazy.
Have pity on me and stop torturing me!

I've stayed up nights, and I wish that sleep
Would have found its way to my eyes.
And that which I hid, I quickly found
Was obvious to see, obvious to see.

I wasted my precious youth.
I found your name in love.
And when I pictured you in my future.
I pictured you as beautiful as possible.

You are precious to me and you've made me crazy.
Have pity on me and stop torturing me!


I'm patient, but the days of my life keep passing,
And I've forgotten my soul.
I've lost my life.
And what have I gained? Pain and agony.


My tears of sacrifice, have burrowed my cheeks.
In my black nights,
I stay quiet and hide, but stay faithful in my love.
Keeping my dreams alive, keeping my dreams alive.

atra201
01-13-2007, 10:59 PM
Love came to us,
And it captured us,

And her eyelashes,
Trapped me in love.

So love captured us and we surrendered.
And he who trapped us shall set us free.

'Cause she is always on my mind.
Oh good lord, always on my mind.

You, who has captured me with your eyes,
Why not tell me where we are headed?

To a new wound?
Or nowhere at all?
Or are you leading me finally to happiness?

Why do I ask?
Why am I so worried.
One day time will tell.

So let us keep on walking the path.


Let us pass, sweet love, let us pass.
To the entrance of forever, lead us.

My life is with her.
And my love is her.

Let's go, you who has forgotten our path,

And the stars of the sky will embrace us,
And take us far away together.


Remember us, remember us,
Oh love, remember us.
And try not to hurt us.


And bring us closer, don't tear us apart.
And bring us joy with our beloved.

And if love sweeps us away,
we'll finally be relieved.

So let us keep on walking the path.

Canuck
01-14-2007, 12:12 AM
Love came to us,
And it captured us,

And her eyelashes,
Trapped me in love.

So love captured us and we surrendered.
And he who trapped us shall set us free.

'Cause she is always on my mind.
Oh good lord, always on my mind.

You, who has captured me with your eyes,
Why not tell me where we are headed?

To a new wound?
Or nowhere at all?
Or are you leading me finally to happiness?

Why do I ask?
Why am I so worried.
One day time will tell.

So let us keep on walking the path.


Let us pass, sweet love, let us pass.
To the entrance of forever, lead us.

My life is with her.
And my love is her.

Let's go, you who has forgotten our path,

And the stars of the sky will embrace us,
And take us far away together.


Remember us, remember us,
Oh love, remember us.
And try not to hurt us.


And bring us closer, don't tear us apart.
And bring us joy with our beloved.

And if love sweeps us away,
we'll finally be relieved.

So let us keep on walking the path.

mann you got so much talent :D You should be a lyricist!

Amelie
01-14-2007, 07:10 AM
soooo beautiful...create a song for me :wub: please...

atra201
01-14-2007, 02:22 PM
mann you got so much talent :D You should be a lyricist!

oh no they aren't to be sung.

atra201
01-14-2007, 02:24 PM
soooo beautiful...create a song for me :wub: please...

i will my friend :wub:
but perfection needs patience so check back in a couple of days. ;)

I <3 Zombies
01-14-2007, 02:48 PM
Amazing... just... wow

Amelie
01-14-2007, 03:03 PM
i will my friend :wub:
but perfection needs patience so check back in a couple of days. ;)

you're sooo nice... :wub:

atra201
01-14-2007, 11:02 PM
last night i was thinking about something and couldn't sleep so i got nothing for today
now i goo to sleep (if i can)
700posts

Amelie
01-15-2007, 12:21 PM
hey atra, we have the same number of posts! :eek:

garçoncanadien
01-15-2007, 12:24 PM
heyyy atra you've got company now

i can write poems as well, in French :D

atra201
01-15-2007, 11:24 PM
hey atra, we have the same number of posts! :eek:

haah i beet you ;)

atra201
01-15-2007, 11:25 PM
heyyy atra you've got company now

i can write poems as well, in French :D

cool so how about you post for a day and I post the other?

I <3 Zombies
01-15-2007, 11:43 PM
Keep posting those, we should get more people. You never know what talent you really have.

garçoncanadien
01-16-2007, 11:39 PM
<TABLE><TD>

Comme le vent

L’Alizé m’a emporté
Tout au fond des nuages et des vagues
L’Alizé m’a fait brûlé
Tout au bout du ciel et des étoiles

Avec tout ça je me suis noyé dans le chagrin
Et toi, tu sais pas comment j’ai souffert
Comme les racines d’un bois, j’ai ouvert

La route à un nouveau rayon de lumière
La route à une nouvelle mode de vie
C’est avec l’Alizé que je pouvais croire
C’est avec l’Alizé que je pouvais croire
Qu’à la lueur d’une flamme il y a encore d’espoir
Qu’à la lueur d’une femme je peux encore y voir

Les oiseaux s’envolent et les dauphins se surgissent
Puisque là-haut, y’a une voix qui leur dit
Y’a une seule chose qui peut te relâcher
Y’a une seule force qui peut te donner

Ce que tu cherches, c’est le souffle du vent
Ce que tu cherches, c’est bien l’esprit sans bornes
C’est avec moi que tu peux t’élever à

La route à un nouveau rayon de lumière
La route à une nouvelle mode de vie
C’est avec l’Alizé que je pouvais croire
C’est avec l’Alizé que je pouvais croire
Qu’à la lueur d’une flamme il y a encore d’espoir
Qu’à la lueur d’une femme je peux encore y voir

</TD><TD>

Like the wind

The tradewind took me
To the bottom of the clouds and the waves
The tradewind burned me
To the top of the sky and the stars

With all this I drowned in sadness
And you, you don’t know how I suffered
Like the roots of a tree, I opened

The route to a new ray of light
The route to a new way of life
It’s with the tradewind that I had believed
It’s with the tradewind that I had believed
That under the glimmer of a flame there’s still hope
That under the glimmer of a lady I can still see

The birds flying and the dolphins surging forth
Because up there, there is a voice that tells them
There is only one thing that can release you
There is only force that can give you

What you’re looking for, is the breath of the wind
What you are looking for, is actually a boundless soul
It’s with me that you can fly to

The route to a new ray of light
The route to a new way of life
It’s with the tradewind that I had believed
It’s with the tradewind that I had believed
That under the glimmer of a flame there’s still hope
That under the glimmer of a lady I can still see

</TD></TABLE>

atra201
01-17-2007, 11:17 PM
The tradewind took me
To the bottom of the clouds and the waves
The tradewind burned me
To the top of the sky and the stars

With all this I drowned in sadness
And you, you don’t know how I suffered
Like the roots of a tree, I opened

The route to a new ray of light
The route to a new way of life
It’s with the tradewind that I had believed
It’s with the tradewind that I had believed
That under the glimmer of a flame there’s still hope
That under the glimmer of a lady I can still see

The birds flying and the dolphins surging forth
Because up there, there is a voice that tells them
There is only one thing that can release you
There is only force that can give you

What you’re looking for, is the breath of the wind
What you are looking for, is actually a boundless soul
It’s with me that you can fly to

The route to a new ray of light
The route to a new way of life
It’s with the tradewind that I had believed
It’s with the tradewind that I had believed
That under the glimmer of a flame there’s still hope
That under the glimmer of a lady I can still see

very nice mr garçoncanadien i never thought of the Alizé(tradewind) connection just WOW

atra201
01-17-2007, 11:22 PM
Amelie here you are please sing it for me in youir next lesson :wub:

O pretty girl
You have driven us mad
Your eyes have charmed us
No matter how much
People envy us, talk about us
We will always come back to you

Longing for you
Like your departure
Has tormented us
Yet we will come back to you
Our best poetry and song
Are written for you
But you do not care about us
Yet we will come back to you

Zack -Alizee Lover-
01-17-2007, 11:23 PM
Uhm i think she said it had connection with the Wind
on the interview at Italy

bt_bird_90
01-17-2007, 11:31 PM
very nice mr garçoncanadien i never thought of the Alizé(tradewind) connection just WOW
bwahaha, there is no way to describe you atra, you're just... atra :D

atra, I wrote a poem just for you:


French:

Tous les vents,
Balayent les maux de cœur
Moi, j'suis comme le vent :
L'esprit à mille à l'heure,
Je juge sans doute trop vite
C'est ok, tant pis
C'est juste là, je m'agite
Je grandis, l'amour aussi

C'est au gré du vent
Que j'aime vagabonder,
Moi, je suis comme le vent
J'embrasse toute une armée
De rêves et de bleuets,
Me plonger dedans
Je sais ce que je sais
Même si j'pleure tout l'temps
Alors, dis...


English:

All the winds,
Blow the evil out of the heart
Me, I'm like the wind:
The spirit of 1000 kph
I judge without any doubt to fast
That's ok, even worse
It's just there, that I'm worried
I grow up, the love as well

It's by the grace of the wind
That I like to tramp,
Me, I'm like the wind
I embrace a whole army
Of dreams and cornflowers,
Dive into it
I know what I know
Even if I cry all the time
So, say...

atra201
01-17-2007, 11:38 PM
Uhm i think she said it had connection with the Wind
on the interview at Italy

yeah i know that i ment in my writings ;)

atra201
01-17-2007, 11:43 PM
bwahaha, there is no way to describe you atra, you're just... atra :D

atra, I wrote a poem just for you:


English:

All the winds,
Blow the evil out of the heart
Me, I'm like the wind:
The spirit of 1000 kph
I judge without any doubt to fast
That's ok, even worse
It's just there, that I'm worried
I grow up, the love as well

It's by the grace of the wind
That I like to tramp,
Me, I'm like the wind
I embrace a whole army
Of dreams and cornflowers,
Dive into it
I know what I know
Even if I cry all the time
So, say...

thank you so sweet i guess :) :D

Amelie
01-18-2007, 11:36 AM
atra, it's so beautiful..thank you so much...:wub:

aFrenchie
01-18-2007, 03:57 PM
<TABLE><TD>

Comme le vent

L’Alizé m’a emporté
Tout au fond des nuages et des vagues
L’Alizé m’a fait brûlé
Tout au bout du ciel et des étoiles

Avec tout ça je me suis noyé dans le chagrin
Et toi, tu sais pas comment j’ai souffert
Comme les racines d’un bois, j’ai ouvert

La route à un nouveau rayon de lumière
La route à une nouvelle mode de vie
C’est avec l’Alizé que je pouvais croire
C’est avec l’Alizé que je pouvais croire
Qu’à la lueur d’une flamme il y a encore d’espoir
Qu’à la lueur d’une femme je peux encore y voir

Les oiseaux s’envolent et les dauphins se surgissent
Puisque là-haut, y’a une voix qui leur dit
Y’a une seule chose qui peut te relâcher
Y’a une seule force qui peut te donner

Ce que tu cherches, c’est le souffle du vent
Ce que tu cherches, c’est bien l’esprit sans bornes
C’est avec moi que tu peux t’élever à

La route à un nouveau rayon de lumière
La route à une nouvelle mode de vie
C’est avec l’Alizé que je pouvais croire
C’est avec l’Alizé que je pouvais croire
Qu’à la lueur d’une flamme il y a encore d’espoir
Qu’à la lueur d’une femme je peux encore y voir

</TD><TD>

Like the wind

The tradewind took me
To the bottom of the clouds and the waves
The tradewind burned me
To the top of the sky and the stars

With all this I drowned in sadness
And you, you don’t know how I suffered
Like the roots of a tree, I opened

The route to a new ray of light
The route to a new way of life
It’s with the tradewind that I had believed
It’s with the tradewind that I had believed
That under the glimmer of a flame there’s still hope
That under the glimmer of a lady I can still see

The birds flying and the dolphins surging forth
Because up there, there is a voice that tells them
There is only one thing that can release you
There is only force that can give you

What you’re looking for, is the breath of the wind
What you are looking for, is actually a boundless soul
It’s with me that you can fly to

The route to a new ray of light
The route to a new way of life
It’s with the tradewind that I had believed
It’s with the tradewind that I had believed
That under the glimmer of a flame there’s still hope
That under the glimmer of a lady I can still see

</TD></TABLE>
Table test......
(didn't know one could do that!!!)
<TABLE><TD>
Column 1......

Line 1
Line 2
Line 3
</TD><TD>
Column 2......

Line 1
Line 2
Line 3
</TD><TD>
Column 3......

Line 1
Line 2
Line 3
</TD></TABLE>

:D :D

garçoncanadien
01-18-2007, 04:12 PM
ouaissss on peut faire ça :D

CFHollister
01-18-2007, 08:06 PM
Table test......
(didn't know one could do that!!!)
<TABLE><TD>
Column 1......

Line 1
Line 2
Line 3
</TD><TD>
Column 2......

Line 1
Line 2
Line 3
</TD><TD>
Column 3......

Line 1
Line 2
Line 3
</TD></TABLE>

:D :D

Hey, I had no idea you could do that!:blink: Eventually I'll have to go back and fix my Pronunciation Lessons like that, though with my recent job assignment you'll have to give me some time.

aFrenchie
01-18-2007, 08:42 PM
Hey, I had no idea you could do that!:blink: Eventually I'll have to go back and fix my Pronunciation Lessons like that, though with my recent job assignment you'll have to give me some time.
I knew that would interest you ;)

atra201
01-19-2007, 03:49 AM
Hey, I had no idea you could do that!:blink: Eventually I'll have to go back and fix my Pronunciation Lessons like that, though with my recent job assignment you'll have to give me some time.

i believe that is HTML code

atra201
01-19-2007, 02:18 PM
bwahaha, there is no way to describe you atra, you're just... atra :D

atra, I wrote a poem just for you:



and i wrote one for you too it took me 2 days to finish writing
<TABLE><TD>
French
De t'attendre Si c'est ainsi
Mais comprendre Que l'ennemie
N'a pas de voix N'est pas celle qu'on croit
Va comprendre Que c'est le temps qui nous unira?

En dormant Est-elle "toile"?
Est-elle tendre, ses doigts

Sont-ils aimants? Je vois ses gestes
Qui ressemblent... aux miens
Est-elle jeunesse, je laisse
Le poids de mon destin... entre... tes mains
Retiens

Retiens-moi pour l'amour de l'autre
Retiens-moi, ce n'est pas de ma faute
Même, si je vois, c'est mon choix:
Ton coeur est dé...jà pris, aus..
...si je crois, que l'amour est parfois, ainsi.
Et retiens-moi
C'était dit, je sais: ton cœur est pris, et
Retiens-moi
Même si c'est... ainsi.

De t'attendre Si c'est ainsi
Mais surprendre Tous les non-dits
Je perds ma voix Quand je suis près de toi
Va comprendre Si c'est le temps qui nous manquera?

En dormant Est-elle "toile"?
Est-elle tendre, ses doigts

Sont-ils aimants? Je vois tes gestes
Qui s'assemblent... au miens
Des vraies caresses, je laisse
Le poids de son chagrin...
Entre... tes mains,
Retiens...
</TD><TD>
English
Of waiting for you If it is so
But understanding That the enemy
Has no voice she’s not the one we’d think
Understanding That Time is what will bring us together ?

Sleeping Is she a canvas?
Is she tender, are hers loving fingers?

I see her gestures That look... like mine
Is she youth, I leave
The weight of my destiny... between ... your hands
Keep

Keep me for the love of the other
Keep me, it’s not my fault
Even if I see, it’s my choice:
Your heart is already taken, also
I believe, that Love is sometimes, like so.
And keep me

It was said, I know: your heart is already taken, and
Keep me Even if it is ...so.

Of waiting for you
If it is so But to surprise
All that isn’t I loose my voice
When I’m close to you
Understanding Will we be missing the time?
Sleeping Is she a canvas?
Is she tender, are hers loving fingers?
I see your gestures Joining .. mine
Real caresses, I leave
The weight of her grief ...
Between... your hands,
Keep ...</TD></TABLE>

garçoncanadien
01-20-2007, 05:12 PM
i humbly present my next offering to our dearest tinkerbell. i write in French, then translate it for all those who would like a translation.

<TABLE><TD>

L’Alizé s’y arrivait

Le ciel grisâtre semblait si sombre
Et même les visages, on ne les voyait plus
Les foules, elles étaient comme la mer
La mer, si impersonnelle et cassant

Y’avait pas de la joie, de la vraie jolie joie
Il pleuvait toujours mais j’avais tellement soif
Soif de quoi, j’y savais pas à ce temps-là
Mais en fait j’ai su de ce dont il me faudra

Mon âme avait faim d’une vraie jolie voix
Mon âme avait faim des montagnes et des bois
Mon âme avait faim d’un vrai souffle du vent
Un Vent, un Alizé, qui te baisent en passant

Et quand le vent s’est arrivé, le ciel se séparait
Et la pluie elle-même a cessé de me blesser
Et c’est comme ça que l’Alizé me faisait sourire
Et c’est comme ça que l’Alizé me rendrait mon vrai cœur

Mon âme avait faim d’une vraie jolie voix
Mon âme avait faim des montagnes et des bois
Mon âme avait faim d’un vrai souffle du vent
Un Vent, un Alizé, qui te baisent en passant

</TD><TD>

The tradewind arrived there

The gray sky seemed so somber
And even the faces, we didn’t see them any more
The crowds, they were like the sea
The sea, so impersonal and harsh

There wasn’t any joy, some real beautiful joy
It rained always but I was always thirsty
Thirsty for what, I didn’t know it then
But in fact, I know what I really needed

My soul hungered for a true beautiful voice
My soul hungered for the mountains and the trees
My soul hungered for a real gust of wind
A wind, a tradewind, which kissed you in passing

And when the wind came, the sky parted
And even the rain stopped injuring me
And it’s like that the tradewind smiled upon me
And it’s like that the the tradewind returned my real heart back to me

My soul hungered for a true beautiful voice
My soul hungered for the mountains and the trees
My soul hungered for a real gust of wind
A wind, a tradewind, which kissed you in passing

</TD></TABLE>

atra201
01-20-2007, 10:40 PM
Beautiful set of pearls
In your beautiful smile
Are happiness for the suffering and the ailing.
Life would brighten,
If only for seconds
And the dead would come to life
If you were to reveal those pearls
Those who are smitten
By your love
Can only be healed
By the beauty and the brightness
Of your smile
Be generous with a smile
With a look
with a kiss
So your beloved can stay alive

garçoncanadien
01-21-2007, 07:04 AM
atra man how do you do it. You write so well :)

Luc
01-21-2007, 07:49 AM
atra man how do you do it. You write so well :)
I agree, atra is a great writer and poet. But you are not too bad yourself either ;)

atra201
01-21-2007, 08:00 AM
atra man how do you do it. You write so well :)
well you write better than I do (better Quality)
I agree, atra is a great writer and poet. But you are not too bad yourself either ;)

thank you
for this last one pearls in my language mean lolo so after naming my vid this way i remembered this coincedence and how whiter can Alizee's teeth are as white as a pearl :D (i'm not laughing just showing my white teeth)

atra201
01-23-2007, 11:00 PM
:( :( :(
Those I love have departed
My heart thirsts for them
Happiness and merriment are dead
After their departure
Without them life is bitter
And my eyes never cease weeping
:( :( :(
O birds, help me look for my beloved
Anywhere, everywhere
Whether asleep or awake
I feel exiled without them
I am as good as dead

Amelie
01-24-2007, 11:57 AM
we have so amazing poets here! garconcanadien, your poetry is like...songs...well, they are very beautiful! Alizee should thank for it! and she should thank for atra's work too! i like your poetry atra so much! it's beautiful! especially i like the one with those...pearls...pearls immediatly remind me Alizee! and atra, thank you very much! you know, for what, you're amazing, merci beaucoup...;)

atra201
01-24-2007, 12:11 PM
we have so amazing poets here! garconcanadien, your poetry is like...songs...well, they are very beautiful! Alizee should thank for it! and she should thank for atra's work too! i like your poetry atra so much! it's beautiful! especially i like the one with those...pearls...pearls immediatly remind me Alizee! and atra, thank you very much! you know, for what, you're amazing, merci beaucoup...;)

well thank you very very beaucoup much :D
any time i'm here for you
:)

bt_bird_90
01-24-2007, 04:55 PM
we have so amazing poets here! garconcanadien, your poetry is like...songs...well, they are very beautiful! Alizee should thank for it! and she should thank for atra's work too! i like your poetry atra so much! it's beautiful! especially i like the one with those...pearls...pearls immediatly remind me Alizee! and atra, thank you very much! you know, for what, you're amazing, merci beaucoup...;)

Ah, nothing more poetic than a spec of dirt covered in lairs of creamy mucus found inside a creature that is pretty much a giant tongue, surrounded in a calcified shell, found at the bottom of murky seawater.

atra201
01-25-2007, 10:21 PM
i got nothing new but this
R is for Red
Red is for Blood
Blood is for Heart
Heart is for Love
Love is you
you is for me
me is for you
I Love You

atra201
02-10-2007, 10:04 AM
i wanted this to be the Wrapping up of my first 1000 posts and become the sixth memebr to reach 1000 and maybe my only 1000
i spent weeks working on it and still it is not as i want it to be i may keep editing.
and i'd like to thank those who made it possible (you know who you are).
.............................
Do they know my lady
That you travel with me
That you sleep with me
That you stay up late with me
That you are my exile and my bed

And you are the poem that
Relieves my hurt

Do they know my lady
That you are a playful girl
That plays on my ribs
And cries on my ribs
And sleeps on my ribs

And you are a dagger emigrated
To my body and never returned

Do they know my lady
That your Celestial voice
Is like sweet to my ears
And your perennial face
Is like radiant stars

And you are a vestigial piece
A masterpiece that has not been completed
And a flower that has not been planted

Do they know my lady
That I am a ring
In your finger

And you are sadness
Screamed and reacted to it
...............My tears

So why when ever I read
To you my poems
You cry and pacify …?
..............................

Zack -Alizee Lover-
02-10-2007, 11:37 AM
No Problem atra.
Nice!
pongase romantica please dame un kiss.

aditya8617
02-10-2007, 11:51 AM
We have poets, linguists, artists, people searching for news, people making videos, people selling getting HIGH pills:p others maintaining a website. I am the only one unemployed on this forum:( . Anyone got a job for me?

atra201
02-10-2007, 12:16 PM
We have poets, linguists, artists, people searching for news, people making videos, people selling getting HIGH pills:p others maintaining a website. I am the only one unemployed on this forum:( . Anyone got a job for me?

well you can be the guy we turn to for wisdom around the forums.
first question where were you 2 days ago?

Amelie
02-10-2007, 12:21 PM
why you all are so talented?

garçoncanadien
02-10-2007, 12:43 PM
why are uuuu so talented Amélie ;)

Amelie
02-10-2007, 12:49 PM
why are uuuu so talented Amélie ;)

garconcanadien c'est pas ma faute :D merci beaucoup :wub:

atra201
02-10-2007, 01:11 PM
why you all are so talented?

because you are so talented so we drink a few talent drops every chance we have.

aditya8617
02-10-2007, 03:12 PM
well you can be the guy we turn to for wisdom around the forums.
first question where were you 2 days ago?

Wisdom:D yea right!

What do you mean where was I 2 days ago:confused:?

atra201
02-10-2007, 05:41 PM
Wisdom:D yea right!

What do you mean where was I 2 days ago:confused:?

i didn't see you on 9th of february and the late of the 8th

bt_bird_90
02-10-2007, 06:11 PM
We have poets, linguists, artists, people searching for news, people making videos, people selling getting HIGH pills:p others maintaining a website. I am the only one unemployed on this forum:( . Anyone got a job for me?

The position of forum slacker is taken, don't get any ideas ;)

aditya8617
02-10-2007, 07:09 PM
i didn't see you on 9th of february and the late of the 8th

Oh! I played a lot of soccer so I wasn't on my comp so didn't come. Now I am really sore after playing for so long and can barely move so I am visiting every few hours:p .

atra201
02-12-2007, 10:05 AM
Oh! I played a lot of soccer so I wasn't on my comp so didn't come. Now I am really sore after playing for so long and can barely move so I am visiting every few hours:p .

glad to know you're ok.
wish me luck

atra201
02-12-2007, 10:06 AM
No Problem atra.
Nice!
pongase romantica please dame un kiss.

what do you mean

garçoncanadien
02-12-2007, 10:18 AM
he said "you make me feel romantic. Please give me a kiss".

atra201
02-12-2007, 10:21 AM
he said "you make me feel romantic. Please give me a kiss".
what is a kiss? :D
well sice you are the first guy to ask me for a kiss i guess i can give one.(and the last one)
http://www.amazing1.com/BlahImages/Smilies/kiss.gif

atra201
02-13-2007, 10:41 AM
mother's day is coming soon and I may not be around, so I'll just post what I already have. If I come again before may the 13th I'll edit it

this is a poem for Alizee and all mothers :wub:
i'm speaking on behalf of every child Anny Lee included of course:wub:
here goes:


Whenever life makes me cry
it is you who make me happy
O Mother ,
cold nights of winter do not hurt me
cause it is your lap that warms me

Mother, you are more precious than my soul
Mother, you are the cure for my wounds
My Life is my Mother.
How many nights you took care of me
What eyes have cried for me
O Mother ,
I was young and you edified me
a big star you made me
O Mother,
you feed me your love
you play with me your fondness
O my Mother,
Paradise is with you.

(this is just a 1 hour work. unfortunately i had to speed up my plans
i may check up on the forums once a month or once three months
or i'll see you Alizee after five years
it's been a greet six months everybody.:)
maybe i can be reached by email i donot know for sure.)

Amelie
02-13-2007, 10:51 AM
what about he Valentines' day? why i do not see poems with Alizee and Valentine's day? you are Alizee lovers, you must create some...

atra201
02-13-2007, 10:58 AM
what if my valentine already have a valentine?

Amelie
02-13-2007, 11:08 AM
Alizee has millions Valentines all over the world atra :D

aditya8617
02-13-2007, 07:38 PM
what if my valentine already have a valentine?

Create a new universe(dream) where your valentine is YOUR valentine. Just imagine how you would spent your time moment by moment and by the end of it you would have had a nice time;) .

aditya8617
02-13-2007, 07:39 PM
Alizee has millions Valentines all over the world atra :D

How do you know he was talking about Alizee he might have had more misfortune.:p

atra201
02-17-2007, 03:20 PM
well back to the topic at hand

maybe this will do the trick i don't know
this is i song i didn't write it may help take care of Alizee(still cannot call her lili)the bold parts are my favorite

Artist: Rose Royce Lyrics
Song: Wishing on a Star Lyrics

I'm wishing on a star
To follow where you are
I'm wishing on a dream
To follow what it means

And I wish on all the rainbows that I see
I wish on all the people who really dream
And I'm wishing on tomorrow, praying it'll comes
And I'm wishing on all the lovin' we've ever done
I never thought I'd see
A time when you would be
So far away from home
So far away from me

Just think of all the moments that we'd spent
I just can't let you go, for me you were meant
And I didn't mean to hurt you, but I know
That in the game of love you reap what you sow

I feel it's time we should make up, baby
I feel it's time for us to get back together
And make the best of things, oh, baby
When we're together, whether or never
I'm wishing on a star
To follow where you are
I'm wishing on a star
And I wish on all the rainbows that I see

I'm wishing on a star, oh,oh
To follow where you are
I'm wishing on a star, baby
To follow wherever you might be

Wishing in a star, oh, oh
To follow where you are, oh, oh, ah, ah