Echoing Jalen again here:
Yeah, Marquis, lotta people making lotta suggestions, but my favorites are the two posters you started out with - the ones with
less type on 'em!
You've got a lot of talent, kiddo! A great eye for design and composition!
If you
do change the wording on your posters, try to still keep the total text to a minimum. Nobody has time to stop and actually
read a poster or ad these days, so the poster or ad has to be able to get its message across in less than a second.
But I'm guessing you already knew that. Again, great work!