It's pretty close to what I've understood it to be.
The part where it says Collegienne aux bas, I thought meant Student below, in other words underneath this Lolita is really a student.
Then Bleus de methylene I thought meant blue jeans.
Motus et bouche qui n'dis pas a mama que je suis un phenomene, is pretty close to what you have. Quiet and with a mouth that doesn't tell mama that I'm a phenom.
Some other small differences
Instead of It's Lola who's bleeding............it's Lola who bleeds
When my tongue slips............when I have a slip of the tongue
As far as note 3..............chats is I believe plural for cats. Of the several interpretations I've read, the one I believe is the one that says that cats represents other Lolitas, that I guess are freinds of hers. As to what the whole sentence means, you'll have to figure that out for yourself.
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