I think it looks great. I like the red on black.
I would also recommend going with high quality shirt and process even if it runs a few buck more. You want the logo and fabric to stay solid over many washes and last several years. Also check embroidery prices.
If the pre-orders are short of the next discount tier, I would be open to investing a few hundred bucks to purchase (or assist in the purchase of) inventory to push into the next discount tier.
Edit: We're not bumping up against any copyright or trademark problems here are we?
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