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Song for Alizée
Okay, so I saw that Deepwaters dedicated a book to Alizée and wrote a poem. Umesh wrote a poem and Martin has his beautiful art. Many members, RMJ for example, dedicate many photoshop projects to her. Feeling left out, I decided to write a song for our "Dolphin Enchantress". It's my first song an is nothing special, but I did my best.
Any constructive criticism would be appreciated, as I am desperately trying to improve. Here are the lyrics: Quote:
And the chord structure is fairly basic, if anyone wants it just ask. Anyway, without further ado, here it is. (Brad, if this is in the wrong place feel free to move).
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Last edited by Killian; 07-20-2007 at 04:21 PM.. |
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Nice sound, Killian. Is that you singing on the MP3?
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Yeah, it is.
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I love the sound of the guitar.
This song is just great . I hope you remember us when u get to be famous
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Great!Alizée must hear this
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Killian, the music and lyrics are great, but this criticism is not really so constructive, 'cause I just have a problem with male vocals, no matter what. I have very few male vocalists in my music library, and they're either funny or have the best voices you can find. So I guess all I could say is that you should have a girl sing it .
Remember, it's not against your voice. I just don't like listening to most men singing.
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That's okay Espire I understand. Alizée is the only female artist in my music collection and I have over 100 artists. But thanks, for the compliments.
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well it's good to know that people on this forum do have musical talent i don't think i could ever do that. really cool.
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Thanks joey. Any chance anyone with a bit of know how could give me some hints about the lyrics, and how to improve them.
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Good job i like it...
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