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#1
06-25-2007, 02:33 AM
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A cute love story....
as were are aware what is love, and the meaninig of it... every one would have fallen in love it's a nature... nobody can change it as every one exprienced in it..... Love is a constellation of emotions and experiences related to a sense of strong affection....
The meaning of love varies relative to context. 1. Romantic love is seen as an ineffable feeling of intense attraction shared in passionate or intimate attraction and intimate interpersonal sexual relationships. 2. Love can also be construed as Platonic love, 3. Religious love, 4. familial love, and, more casually, great affection for anything. so here is a small and sweet love story.... i have taken a butterfly as an example.. In this story we come to know that how a female butterfly loves a male butterfly... how much she loves.... and what she gives to prove her love. its really superb read this one with heartful and peaceful mind... this story was written by me once upon a time there was two butterflies in which two of them used to love each other deeply.... one day these two butterfiles were playing hide and seek.... Female butterfly: "we shall play one game" Male butterfly: "he agreed to it" Female butterfly: "who ever will sit on that flower first in the next morning is having more love". Male butterfly: "he agreed" The next day he was waiting for the opening of the flower to sit, the flower opened, she was dead inside that flower..... yes, she stayed inside that flower for the whole night to prove that how much she loves on him(Male butterfly).... ------------> Uméesh how did u feel about this story..... it may be simple but sweet
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06-25-2007, 02:47 AM
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what a sad and short story
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06-25-2007, 03:34 AM
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The idea is touching and not trying to be mean or anything because I know english may not be your first language and sometimes it takes fairly good knowledge of how to use the english language to make a very compelling and touching story.
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06-25-2007, 04:01 AM
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06-25-2007, 04:28 AM
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06-25-2007, 04:33 AM
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06-25-2007, 04:35 AM
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hi everybody... this story is a short, dont think that am expert in writing stories... i have just done it what i have thought.... but it seems to be good nor bad......
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06-25-2007, 07:41 AM
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so far i was the only on that voted OK, it wasn't boring, however it wasn't interesting either, i feel as if it lacked a actual moral lesson, i see that she stayed in the flower all night showing her love, however it killed her doing so, thats leaves me to wonder if she knew it would kill her, cuz if she didn't know, then she unwillingly committed suicide, leaving her lover, and letting him mourn over her untimely death, however if she did know, then that leads to the point of "Love killed her" which can mean a multitude of things, that being the relationship was stressed and aggrevating (you can still love each other deeply in such situations) and she saw this as a compromise to not expressing her true feelings to herself or her lover, or she loved him so much that she died for him (self-sacrifice), however this leaves him alone which i doubt would make him feel like she did him a favor, or she belives the psycological concept of Love is Death, by showing endurement of torture to prove the face of love, however this only shows that their communication was far broken, y did the male not know of this happening, moreso, why didn't she tell him? did she not tell him to prove a point of love... maybe, but at the ultimate cost that only hurts him in the end, and if she's so deeply in love with him, y would she leave him alone in the world? did she think thats what was best for him? Best for her? Best for the relationship?
Well i'm gonna bank on that she didn't know which leaves no fundemental moral lesson?
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