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My Song for Alizée
This was a spur of the moment song really. I decided to make it a progressive jazz style, so I improvised a solo to last through out the song. Improvised the bassline, and just added a syncopated swing drum style. Scribbled some lyrics, thought they made sense, and here we are, my first RECORDED song dedicated to Alizée. Be judgeful please Quote:
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"I will write Peace on your wings, and you will fly all over the world."
Last edited by TheBarrett; 08-23-2008 at 04:38 AM.. |
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Great guitar licks, bass play and drum action. Definitely jazz influenced. To me your synthesized voice didn't match the jazz sound. I would prefer a more natural sound. All in all great job though Mr. Barrett
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I thought my voice was bad in the natural overtone that I played it in. I experimented with echo with a short delay and I thought it would match the texture I tried to piece in. But yeah, this isn't my singing style, then again, I don't have mine. I rip my singing style from Mikael Åkerfeldt.
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I think you have a good idea going here. I would expand on it if I were you. I think you should add another verse and possibly some kind of bridge.
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Great song. Great guitar work especially. Good job can't wait to hear the next one (if you make another).
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