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that first one is awesome, maquis
However I wouldn't add as much text as that third one (i think, too tired to check) "born in corsica.... lolita... mylene... fish.... hiatus... tattoos" I'd just have it say "Alizée", and two or three songs with French titles (so as not to mislead) then a link here and the official youtube channel
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Very nice. A+++++!
Echoing Jalen again here:
Yeah, Marquis, lotta people making lotta suggestions, but my favorites are the two posters you started out with - the ones with less type on 'em! You've got a lot of talent, kiddo! A great eye for design and composition! If you do change the wording on your posters, try to still keep the total text to a minimum. Nobody has time to stop and actually read a poster or ad these days, so the poster or ad has to be able to get its message across in less than a second. But I'm guessing you already knew that. Again, great work! |
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Ok so I really love your posters still. But they still seem just a bit scattered. Alot of random info like how she is from corsica. I like how you said she was a french singer though. I'm not the one to talk since there is nothing I can think of better right now, but it still just seems so scattered and with some random info like the Gourmandises and Corsica thing....dunno
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why does it seem that I'm always the first comment on every other page?
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This one has been used a number of times.
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