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[Poem] not so much Amazing
Tell her : How much I love you moon face,
The gloss of my dreams. My heart is flooded with emotions , that turned stone into diamond, whispering: I love you today, I love tomorrow, I love you for ever.
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Don't be so modest, atra. Your poem is very nice and it describes perfectly our feelings about Alizée
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a poem doesn't have to be long to be a good one. very nice atra202.
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Quote:
indeed it does
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thanks and i haven't reached 202 status yet.
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That's funny. LOL.
Back to topic: At least you've the creativity to express your feelings and thoughts on pen-paper (okay on pixel-pixel).
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thanks and in both pen-paper and pixel-pixel.
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just hope the one person it is intended for to read this .
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A Christmas song I wrote for Alizée.
Follow The Star It's Christmas time and I'm outside. I see the bright star in the sky. Should I follow it, I must decide. Heading to the east in search of you The journey will be far but it's worth it that's why. *Chorus* Follow the star in search of you The miles are many but I need to do To find the promise one who will be the Queen of all Queens You will bring peace, love, and what is true Paris, France feeling the magic in the air. The falling snow dances off my coat. As I stare straight to the brillant light. Seeing many already there, this will be a special night. *Chorus* Surrounded by many she starts to sing. Everyone sighs in harmony. From then on, the world will never be like it was. She says merci to all that believe and came. Alizée is her name. Copyright © 2006 Sir Papa Productions |
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Nice Follow the Star, my first reaction when I saw that was to think of the song Suivre l'étoile. Although they are completely unrelated.
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