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Looks like we may not need donations after all, thanks to Bladegear's super generous offer to print the banner for free! Shipping might still be an issue, depending on if I can take it aboard a plane or not, but I'll try to cover that myself.
So are we in agreement about the text? Could a native speaker confirm the French? Not that there's much room for errors, but I'd just like to be 200% sure before finalizing the design and sending it off to Bladegear. Thanks everyone! Last edited by Ben; 02-21-2009 at 09:27 PM.. |
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Being into this or not, thanks Bladegear ! That's very nice mate .
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Yeah man! Alizée India! I don't think I will go to India for Alizée. That's just too much. (the flights getting there last time were brutal) But if you have fans, go for it. Hey, there's always Uméesh from the Kolar Gold Fields.
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Very rough test, just to get feedback:
Last edited by Ben; 02-22-2009 at 03:12 AM.. Reason: Updated image to incorporate some suggestions |
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It looks good Ben. I mean, you're designing it so, do you like it too?
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Sweet Looks great. I'd ask the printer how he thinks it will look at the size you're thinking of though.
I wonder if it could use a little more contrast on the lettering; so, maybe a white shadow instead of black? So, she's flying to the US... though it does look more like falling. I think it communicates.
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Very nice, Ben! I think it achieves exactly what you were looking for.
The only suggestion I have would be to maybe put a bit more space between the URLs, or break them up with a bullet point or a simple graphic of some kind. Otherwise it's perfect. Well done, sir. Please don't hesitate to let me know if you want/need any help with shipping costs, or whatnot.
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rough test !? whoa this one is very cool Ben, nice job indeed . I just want to point out something, I wonder if that red color (in the website's links) will be easily readable and visible to people at a certain distance ?
Well, I guess there is no better color that can fit on the banner's design than red . Just my thoughts. Again, nice design |
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Thanks guys. I lightened the text and added a tilde between the urls, both good suggestions. Keep 'em coming...
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