Song for Alizée

[Uméesha]

Originally Posted by Killian

Okay, so I saw that Deepwaters dedicated a book to Alizée and wrote a poem. Umesh wrote a poem and Martin has his beautiful art. Many members, RMJ for example, dedicate many photoshop projects to her. Feeling left out, I decided to write a song for our "Dolphin Enchantress". It's my first song an is nothing special, but I did my best.

Any constructive criticism would be appreciated, as I am desperately trying to improve.

Here are the lyrics:

And the chord structure is fairly basic, if anyone wants it just ask.

Anyway, without further ado, here it is.

(Brad, if this is in the wrong place feel free to move).

killian nice song, really awesome..... guitar sounds good, its a mind blowing (melody) song with a chorus.... thank for sharing... i think its a first song for you? always first try is the best try killian, keep up the work and do lots of songs and musics....

[marik]

awesome Killian! great song! keep it up!

[French Fan]

Wow j'adore!!!
La musique est excellente et bien entraînante et les choeurs derrière ça le fait

[Deepwaters]

Originally Posted by French Fan

Wow j'adore!!!
La musique est excellente et bien entraînante et les choeurs derrière ça le fait

"Wow I adore it!!!

The music is excellent and really swinging and the chorus at the end makes it "

(Merci pour l'exercise.

"entraînante" was a new word for me.

[oO°TiNkErBeLL°Oo]

Je suis d'accord avec toi French Fan
Congrats to Killian for this amazing song

[thats amazazazing]

Originally Posted by Killian

Okay, so I saw that Deepwaters dedicated a book to Alizée and wrote a poem. Umesh wrote a poem and Martin has his beautiful art. Many members, RMJ for example, dedicate many photoshop projects to her. Feeling left out, I decided to write a song for our "Dolphin Enchantress". It's my first song an is nothing special, but I did my best.

Any constructive criticism would be appreciated, as I am desperately trying to improve.

Here are the lyrics:

And the chord structure is fairly basic, if anyone wants it just ask.

Anyway, without further ado, here it is.

(Brad, if this is in the wrong place feel free to move).

I was worried this was going be recorded with some horrid recording equipment, and have bad quality, TBH, but you surprised me

I liked the sound, not a fan of the lyrics though

all and all, nice sound

[Deepwaters]

Just giving you guys an update. Lefty composed not one, but two songs, and he's a genius so they're great. I've written lyrics for both of them, and Killian is finalizing the vocals and mixing. We should have them both ready to share very soon.

[fsquared]

Originally Posted by Killian

Okay, so I saw that Deepwaters dedicated a book to Alizée and wrote a poem. Umesh wrote a poem and Martin has his beautiful art. Many members, RMJ for example, dedicate many photoshop projects to her. Feeling left out, I decided to write a song for our "Dolphin Enchantress". It's my first song an is nothing special, but I did my best.

Any constructive criticism would be appreciated, as I am desperately trying to improve.

Here are the lyrics:

And the chord structure is fairly basic, if anyone wants it just ask.

Anyway, without further ado, here it is.

(Brad, if this is in the wrong place feel free to move).

Killian,
Thanks for your contribution! I'm looking forward to hearing more from your collaboration with Deepwaters and lefty. Very impressive!

I like the lead guitar at the beginning; it kind of reminds me of old 80's New Order. The only minor suggestion I might have is regarding the placement of that lead guitar beat-wise relative to the rhythm guitar. It seems slightly off the beat. (Perhaps that is intentional).

Thanks again!

[Killian]

Originally Posted by fsquared

Killian,
Thanks for your contribution! I'm looking forward to hearing more from your collaboration with Deepwaters and lefty. Very impressive!

I like the lead guitar at the beginning; it kind of reminds me of old 80's New Order. The only minor suggestion I might have is regarding the placement of that lead guitar beat-wise relative to the rhythm guitar. It seems slightly off the beat. (Perhaps that is intentional).

Thanks again!

Actually that was lag

I don't know what happened but converting it from aiff to mp3 caused a weird lag in the lead. I couldn't fix it/figure it out, so I thought screw it.

[Stringer]

Wow awsome song!