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Old 02-18-2008, 01:51 PM
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Default Salsa Dogs----Rockets to Mars.

I have started a new band Salsa Dogs and want some opinions on the first demo version of the the song Rockets to Mars. If anyone wants to listen I have placed a link below which brings you to the song. If you would leave constructive ideas not stuff like..."IT SUCKS" Give me a reason why it sucks and what we should do to make it better. Thanks for any input!

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Old 02-18-2008, 03:56 PM
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Not to bad actually, it sounds like something I would listen to. I would love to hear it again after you get it cleaned up in a studio.
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Old 02-18-2008, 07:04 PM
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Your songs sound sorta Ace Frehley-ish. What do you do in the band?
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Old 02-18-2008, 07:27 PM
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I do the vocals and play guitar.
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Ah, all of the important parts.
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Old 02-18-2008, 08:13 PM
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Ah, all of the important parts.
He didn't say he played bass
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Good job ! I like the vocals and what the guitar is doing. I would suggest adding a bridge to introduce a contrasting musical idea (nothing drastic) to build excitment for the final chorus and fade. Something like verse/chorus/verse/chorus/bridge/chorus-fadeout. It could be 4 or 8 bars long and have vocals in it or it could be an instrumental bridge for a solo. Just a suggestion...

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Old 02-18-2008, 08:47 PM
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hey it's pretty good. i liked it much better than your older stuff.
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Old 02-19-2008, 06:16 AM
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OK you say Salsa dogs and my mind immediatly goes here....

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Then a second thought enters and my mind wonders again....
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:P

Seriously tho i kinda like the sound. It almost sounds to be like a classic rock... Lets mix Tompetty and the heartbreakers with a kinks ?
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