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Old 12-29-2006, 05:49 AM
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This was my first Alizee drawing. It's just colored pencils, and I don't trace anything. I'm brand new to the site and this is my first post. I am very interested in feedback, and I like to hear peoples oppinions so please fire away!
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Old 12-29-2006, 07:41 AM
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hey ,c-dawg777, your painting is very good. can I suggest something? i suggest to do not paint her bust so clearly, because..well, look at her dress, do you see those lines? only shadows, so, paint only the shadows, but i love how you did her face, it's very realistic and we can see her original expression in your painting. very well done!
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Old 12-29-2006, 08:15 AM
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Hello c-dawg777, I agree with Amelie but for the rest it's a very good drawing, beautiful !
Btw welcome to the forum
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Old 12-29-2006, 08:26 AM
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Nice - and welcome to the forums :-)

As with the others, I would suggest that her chest not be so clearly defined. The dress is not form fitting, rather, it is a thick material and gives a smooth contour. My only other suggestion would be to lighten her hair towards brown a bit, and away from black.

None the less, quite well done!
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Old 12-29-2006, 09:03 AM
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its okay to draw the "bust". lol. i think its okay to say we all love her body too. ahem...fabulous job dawg
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Old 12-29-2006, 09:07 AM
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its okay to draw the "bust". lol. i think its okay to say we all love her body too. ahem...fabulous job dawg
I've no problem with drawings that show her curves, it's just that this particular outfit is a known one, and doesn't. I wouldn't have mentioned it had the outfit in the drawing been the knit top from Rockollection or something similar.
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Old 12-29-2006, 12:11 PM
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its okay to draw the "bust". lol. i think its okay to say we all love her body too. ahem...fabulous job dawg
LOL(welcome to the forum!)
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Old 12-29-2006, 03:19 PM
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nice drawing dawg, welcome to the website
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Old 12-29-2006, 03:23 PM
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sup dawg. that drawing is fly, cous

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Nice drawing. I agree with the others that the bust needs to be more subtle, just because we all know the outfit and image being portrayed. But hey, it's the artist's prerogative.
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