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Old 12-04-2006, 12:34 PM
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Default [Poem] not so much Amazing

Tell her : How much I love you moon face,
The gloss of my dreams.
My heart is flooded with emotions ,
that turned stone into diamond,
whispering:
I love you today,
I love tomorrow,
I love you for ever.

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"Such a shame to believe in escape
A life on every face
And that's a change, till I'm finally left with an eight
Tell me to react, I just stare
Maybe I don't know if I should change
A feeling that we share...
It's a shame
(Such a shame)
Number me with rage, it's a shame
(Such a shame)
Number me in haste, it's a shame
This eagerness to change
It's a shame..."

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Old 12-04-2006, 01:14 PM
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Don't be so modest, atra. Your poem is very nice and it describes perfectly our feelings about Alizée
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Old 12-04-2006, 01:30 PM
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a poem doesn't have to be long to be a good one. very nice atra202.
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Old 12-04-2006, 01:39 PM
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Don't be so modest, atra. Your poem is very nice and it describes perfectly our feelings about Alizée
thank you, thank you, thank you.
indeed it does
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"Such a shame to believe in escape
A life on every face
And that's a change, till I'm finally left with an eight
Tell me to react, I just stare
Maybe I don't know if I should change
A feeling that we share...
It's a shame
(Such a shame)
Number me with rage, it's a shame
(Such a shame)
Number me in haste, it's a shame
This eagerness to change
It's a shame..."
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Old 12-04-2006, 01:41 PM
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a poem doesn't have to be long to be a good one. very nice atra202.
thanks and i haven't reached 202 status yet.
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"Such a shame to believe in escape
A life on every face
And that's a change, till I'm finally left with an eight
Tell me to react, I just stare
Maybe I don't know if I should change
A feeling that we share...
It's a shame
(Such a shame)
Number me with rage, it's a shame
(Such a shame)
Number me in haste, it's a shame
This eagerness to change
It's a shame..."
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Old 12-04-2006, 08:56 PM
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thanks and i haven't reached 202 status yet.
That's funny. LOL.

Back to topic: At least you've the creativity to express your feelings and thoughts on pen-paper (okay on pixel-pixel).
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Old 12-05-2006, 10:56 AM
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That's funny. LOL.

Back to topic: At least you've the creativity to express your feelings and thoughts on pen-paper (okay on pixel-pixel).
thanks and in both pen-paper and pixel-pixel.
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"Such a shame to believe in escape
A life on every face
And that's a change, till I'm finally left with an eight
Tell me to react, I just stare
Maybe I don't know if I should change
A feeling that we share...
It's a shame
(Such a shame)
Number me with rage, it's a shame
(Such a shame)
Number me in haste, it's a shame
This eagerness to change
It's a shame..."
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Old 12-05-2006, 10:58 AM
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just hope the one person it is intended for to read this .
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"Such a shame to believe in escape
A life on every face
And that's a change, till I'm finally left with an eight
Tell me to react, I just stare
Maybe I don't know if I should change
A feeling that we share...
It's a shame
(Such a shame)
Number me with rage, it's a shame
(Such a shame)
Number me in haste, it's a shame
This eagerness to change
It's a shame..."
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Old 12-10-2006, 05:10 PM
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A Christmas song I wrote for Alizée.

Follow The Star

It's Christmas time and I'm outside.

I see the bright star in the sky.

Should I follow it, I must decide.

Heading to the east in search of you

The journey will be far but it's worth it that's why.

*Chorus*

Follow the star in search of you

The miles are many but I need to do

To find the promise one who will be the Queen of all Queens

You will bring peace, love, and what is true



Paris, France feeling the magic in the air.

The falling snow dances off my coat.

As I stare straight to the brillant light.

Seeing many already there, this will be a special night.

*Chorus*



Surrounded by many she starts to sing.

Everyone sighs in harmony.

From then on, the world will never be like it was.

She says merci to all that believe and came.

Alizée is her name.

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Old 12-10-2006, 06:56 PM
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Nice Follow the Star, my first reaction when I saw that was to think of the song Suivre l'étoile. Although they are completely unrelated.
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