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Old 07-19-2016, 12:19 AM
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Great work Steve_RMX, there's passion there.

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The sentence on the outside says in english:
Love is the only thing that doubles when you share it
It's a nice touch, but how about something like "Happiness is only real when shared".. well I dunno it's just a thought.


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Thanks Dave and you are right, One love and One life dont be missing. I will do it tomorrow morning on a right place. And I forgot the AA logo at the frontpage.


Two suggestions from my side for placing 'One Love' and 'One Life'.
First on the backside and second on the Frontpage. I would prefer the frontpage.

The 'One Love' and 'One Life' quote is great, I'd say either side would be good but I personally like the way it is already.
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Old 07-19-2016, 02:41 AM
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Yes. Great card. However, Steve needs to lose the (STEVE RMX) from the card. No handles!!!


Just a thought, Could you add
"Pace e Salute" to the card anywhere. It brings in the Corsican aspect, and is a key blessing.
In DALS 4, Petragela said it to her in the first and last episode.
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Old 07-19-2016, 07:34 AM
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I think leaving the " Created by Stefan........." is fine. I think the card is very artistically and very professionally done and this will draw no more attention than if "Hallmark" was printed on it, as did the card I had purchased.

Interesting suggestion about adding "Pace a Salute". What does it mean?
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Old 07-19-2016, 08:01 AM
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Indeed the "Created ...." I'm gonna remove.

@scruffydog777 Pace e salute means "Peace and health" in corian

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Old 07-19-2016, 08:40 AM
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I really don't see a need to remove it. You've come up with a great card and as with any artist, should get credit for it.
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Old 07-19-2016, 09:29 AM
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Suggestion, the "Pace e Salute" I could set under the maintype in handwriter font as like a kind of signature.
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Old 07-19-2016, 12:24 PM
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I interpret Rev's post as suggesting to remove only the "Steve RMX" part, not the "created by Steve..." part.
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You are right Ray. The first part gives him credit for the great work he's done which is right and dropping the handle takes nothing away from that.
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Old 07-19-2016, 08:32 PM
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I think leaving the " Created by Stefan........." is fine. I think the card is very artistically and very professionally done and this will draw no more attention than if "Hallmark" was printed on it, as did the card I had purchased.

Interesting suggestion about adding "Pace a Salute". What does it mean?
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I interpret Rev's post as suggesting to remove only the "Steve RMX" part, not the "created by Steve..." part.
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You are right Ray. The first part gives him credit for the great work he's done which is right and dropping the handle takes nothing away from that.

Yes. I was only referring to the part in parenthesis.

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Suggestion, the "Pace e Salute" I could set under the maintype in handwriter font as like a kind of signature.
I think that would be nice.
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Old 07-19-2016, 10:49 PM
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I think leaving the " Created by Stefan........." is fine. I think the card is very artistically and very professionally done and this will draw no more attention than if "Hallmark" was printed on it, as did the card I had purchased.

Interesting suggestion about adding "Pace a Salute". What does it mean?

I agree. Let Stefan take credit for his work.
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