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Old 11-28-2006, 05:34 PM
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Amazing!

It's not a story of beauty, although her beauty is a dilemma itself

Everything about her is natural and supernatural,
she is astonishing more than imaginations


Her kindness lies in the harshness of, her, staying away

Her laugh is the magnitude of her tiers

Her sprit is the sharpness of her knowledge;
she fills your mind with questions.

Amazing!
She is Amazing, she fills you with questions.
She is Amazing, she fills you with questions.

Is she real? Or is she just an imagination?

Is such a being possible or just impossible/unbelievable?

Is her easiness, hard to get or her complexity you think it's too easy to get?

Why every miracle in this universe is related to her?

Why everything about her you think you know it,
yet,you are not aware (ignorant) about.


And why is everything unbelievable about her, yet you still believe it…


Oh the beginnings of love! Oh the endings of absents!

This beauty, its creator is unfair! And so Fair!

Sweeter than wishes, a world of songs!
The most wonderful poems from the start to endings!

Why my existence didn't find to its coldness,
a warmth other than yours

Why my eyes see, and doesn't see other than your exquisiteness

You, the one more gorgeous than imaginations, this is the answer to the questions

So you'd be in my eyes, and from my tenderness, and only with me and not without me Amazing…


atra should know this poem :P
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Old 11-28-2006, 07:18 PM
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Exellent , Exellent
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Old 11-28-2006, 08:02 PM
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very nice, moe!!
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Old 11-28-2006, 10:47 PM
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Amazing!

It's not a story of beauty, although her beauty is a dilemma itself

Everything about her is natural and supernatural,
she is astonishing more than imaginations


Her kindness lies in the harshness of, her, staying away

Her laugh is the magnitude of her tiers

Her sprit is the sharpness of her knowledge;
she fills your mind with questions.

Amazing!
She is Amazing, she fills you with questions.
She is Amazing, she fills you with questions.

Is she real? Or is she just an imagination?

Is such a being possible or just impossible/unbelievable?

Is her easiness, hard to get or her complexity you think it's too easy to get?

Why every miracle in this universe is related to her?

Why everything about her you think you know it,
yet,you are not aware (ignorant) about.


And why is everything unbelievable about her, yet you still believe it…


Oh the beginnings of love! Oh the endings of absents!

This beauty, its creator is unfair! And so Fair!

Sweeter than wishes, a world of songs!
The most wonderful poems from the start to endings!

Why my existence didn't find to its coldness,
a warmth other than yours

Why my eyes see, and doesn't see other than your exquisiteness

You, the one more gorgeous than imaginations, this is the answer to the questions

So you'd be in my eyes, and from my tenderness, and only with me and not without me Amazing…


atra should know this poem :P
wow very amazing did u write it?
and i didn't know about it.
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A life on every face
And that's a change, till I'm finally left with an eight
Tell me to react, I just stare
Maybe I don't know if I should change
A feeling that we share...
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Number me with rage, it's a shame
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Number me in haste, it's a shame
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Old 11-28-2006, 10:57 PM
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nice one! Woot 300!
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Old 11-29-2006, 10:25 AM
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Quite expressive...and quite true!
Well done Moe.
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Old 11-29-2006, 11:05 AM
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Nice Moe. btw she is not for real. She has been totally inactive since I started to follow her whick makes me think she is just imaginary.
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Old 11-29-2006, 01:07 PM
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thats very nice moe
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Old 11-29-2006, 01:14 PM
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really, that's very nice, very nice...
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Old 11-29-2006, 02:29 PM
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very nice Moe
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