Song for Alizée

[Killian]

Okay, so I saw that Deepwaters dedicated a book to Alizée and wrote a poem. Umesh wrote a poem and Martin has his beautiful art. Many members, RMJ for example, dedicate many photoshop projects to her. Feeling left out, I decided to write a song for our "Dolphin Enchantress". It's my first song an is nothing special, but I did my best.

Any constructive criticism would be appreciated, as I am desperately trying to improve.

Here are the lyrics:

The Storm before the Calm


Verse
I’m sick and tired of all this waiting, The rumours flying, but nothing to believe in,
I’m fed up of waiting for you to return, For you to come back, bring a calm to this storm.
Because this storm is killing, this death comes painfully,
I feel my heart breaking in two, every day that I live without you.

Chorus
I can’t but wonder what will I see,
When all winds die down what will there be,
When the fog finally clears, what will remain?
Will my heart ever feel whole again?

Verse
I remember sharing all of your pain, Your happiness, your fear and your shame,
For all your sadness, I shed a tear, but when you laughed my skies were clear.
But now my heart is in distress, a lack of emotion, I feel a mess,
A barren wasteland, an empty place, so it will stay until I see your face.

Chorus

Verse
Sometimes when I feel alone, I think about you, and my spirits grow,
But now that, you are gone, I feel lost, nowhere to turn.
I lie awake on stormy nights, the wind blows through me deep inside,
And I feel something strange, As if the wind is calling your name

Chorus

Verse
The wind it calls out to me saying softly that I should be free
But still I remain alone, waiting for you in the rain and cold.
And I will wait forever more, my emotions will continue to pour,
Down on me along with the rain. Until finally I hear your voice again.

Chorus x2

And the chord structure is fairly basic, if anyone wants it just ask.

Anyway, without further ado, here it is.

(Brad, if this is in the wrong place feel free to move).