A cute love story....

[Uméesha]

as were are aware what is love, and the meaninig of it... every one would have fallen in love it's a nature... nobody can change it as every one exprienced in it..... Love is a constellation of emotions and experiences related to a sense of strong affection....

The meaning of love varies relative to context.

1. Romantic love is seen as an ineffable feeling of intense attraction shared in passionate or intimate attraction and intimate interpersonal sexual relationships.

2. Love can also be construed as Platonic love,

3. Religious love,

4. familial love, and, more casually, great affection for anything.

so here is a small and sweet love story.... i have taken a butterfly as an example..

In this story we come to know that how a female butterfly loves a male butterfly... how much she loves.... and what she gives to prove her love. its really superb read this one with heartful and peaceful mind...

this story was written by me

once upon a time there was two butterflies in which two of them used to love each other deeply.... one day these two butterfiles were playing hide and seek....

Female butterfly: "we shall play one game"

Male butterfly: "he agreed to it"

Female butterfly: "who ever will sit on that flower first in the next morning is having more love".

Male butterfly: "he agreed"

The next day he was waiting for the opening of the flower to sit, the flower opened, she was dead inside that flower..... yes, she stayed inside that flower for the whole night to prove that how much she loves on him(Male butterfly)....

------------> Uméesh
how did u feel about this story..... it may be simple but sweet

[atra201]

what a sad and short story

[Rahul]

wow fantastic story umesh. really its touching the heart. how sad the male butterfly, when he saw the female butterfly dead inside the flower. it's so cute.

[Shinmei]

Beautiful! Just beautiful.

Don't forget the 5th definition of love: Alizée.

[Chommpers]

The idea is touching and not trying to be mean or anything because I know english may not be your first language and sometimes it takes fairly good knowledge of how to use the english language to make a very compelling and touching story.

[Uméesha]

Originally Posted by Chommpers

The idea is touching and not trying to be mean or anything because I know english may not be your first language and sometimes it takes fairly good knowledge of how to use the english language to make a very compelling and touching story.

yeah english is not my first language it's the fifteenth language so, thank you for your comment's chommpers.... as u said it is touching... but for a small story i used english little bit less and not more details about the story.... it's like and first and third person story..... am explaining it in a short!

[marik]

Originally Posted by Umesh

yeah english is not my first language it's the fifteenth language so, thank you for your comment's chommpers.... as u said it is touching... but for a small story i used english little bit less and not more details about the story.... it's like and first and third person story..... am explaining it in a short!

you mean you summarized it! so it is too long too type it Umesh?

[Uméesha]

Originally Posted by marik

you mean you summarized it! so it is too long too type it Umesh?

so wat is your comment on the story?

[Uméesha]

hi everybody... this story is a short, dont think that am expert in writing stories... i have just done it what i have thought.... but it seems to be good nor bad......

[marik]

Originally Posted by Umesh

so wat is your comment on the story?

Love will never lost if you never give up loving your love like me!?

I Love Alizée and that Love would never be break by anyone!

all of here i Love too!


Love you guys!