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Old 12-18-2006, 12:05 PM
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You are the meaning of my life,my existence, my love.
you are the joy of my life, my soul, and everything that I own.

Where do I turn after you? Oh precious.
you turn to beer in times grievance. its very nice... and a very nice poem(s)
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Old 12-18-2006, 10:12 PM
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The nights brought me back again, and renewed the love in my heart.
after she left, she came back and called for me and made my life start new.

Where were you? You who stole my love? Where were you? You whose heart I possess?

Your love, changed my entire outlook.
Your love keeps me awake and lulls me to sleep.

If you're away from me for a second, I miss you.
And I call for you through the hours.
Because of you, my life became joyful.

And with you, I regained my lost life.
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"Such a shame to believe in escape
A life on every face
And that's a change, till I'm finally left with an eight
Tell me to react, I just stare
Maybe I don't know if I should change
A feeling that we share...
It's a shame
(Such a shame)
Number me with rage, it's a shame
(Such a shame)
Number me in haste, it's a shame
This eagerness to change
It's a shame..."
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Old 12-18-2006, 10:16 PM
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Get that, Son! Great poems.
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Old 12-19-2006, 01:08 AM
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you turn to beer in times grievance. its very nice... and a very nice poem(s)
Yeah, to bad alcohol is a mood altering depressant drug. Then again, he's already depressed.

(Sorry for going off-topic.)
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Old 12-19-2006, 02:41 PM
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i wrote this a while back. it was right after a big fight. and yes...i feel comfortable enough to share with the members on this site. not ONE WORD nurv!

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dont hurt your eyes trying to read it...

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Old 12-19-2006, 10:24 PM
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Whoever wants the beautiful should do as commanded,my love can command and i'm at her service.
If for the beautiful I don't work?
if for love I don't torture myself?
if I don't have sleepless nights?
If i don't get mad and angry?
Then I would better stop loving her and just kill myself.
If you are affraid of everything, cannot even take one step
then flirt with birds.
shoot and face the shots, do not run away, for only the courageous shall know the true love.
Get mad but reconcile,be mysterious and clear, flirt.
Grab the opportunity of your love being by your side, open your heart to her and indulge in happiness as she takes you in her arms.
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"Such a shame to believe in escape
A life on every face
And that's a change, till I'm finally left with an eight
Tell me to react, I just stare
Maybe I don't know if I should change
A feeling that we share...
It's a shame
(Such a shame)
Number me with rage, it's a shame
(Such a shame)
Number me in haste, it's a shame
This eagerness to change
It's a shame..."
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Old 12-21-2006, 01:55 AM
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I love you so much and I know that the road to the impossible is long.
I love you so much and I know that I travel in the ocean of your eyes, without a destination.
And I leave my mind behind me and run,
I run, I run back to my madness.
But I also know that you are the queen of women.
The queen of women, and no one can take your place.
I also know that the time of love has ended, and the beautiful words have died.

So to no other woman I say:
I love you so much, I love you so much.

I love you so much and I know you live in isolation, and I live in isolation.
And between you and I there is: wind and clouds and lightning and thunder and ice and fire.

And I know that reaching your eyes is an illusion.
And I know that reaching you would be suicide.
And it would make me happy, to tear myself to pieces for your sake, my precious one.

And if I had to choose, if I had to choose,
I would choose your love for the second time.

How many times did your likeness appear in the leaves of the trees?
How many times did I shower you with patience like drops of rain?

Oh woman, who holds my heart between her hands,

I asked you, by god, do not leave me!
No, no, no, no, don't leave me!
For what would I be without you?
I love you so much, so much, so much.
And I refuse to give up the fire of your love
For why would I wait to find love just to refuse it?
And I don't care if I escape from your love alive.
And I don't care if I escape dead!
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"Such a shame to believe in escape
A life on every face
And that's a change, till I'm finally left with an eight
Tell me to react, I just stare
Maybe I don't know if I should change
A feeling that we share...
It's a shame
(Such a shame)
Number me with rage, it's a shame
(Such a shame)
Number me in haste, it's a shame
This eagerness to change
It's a shame..."
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Old 12-21-2006, 02:48 PM
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Alizee i love you
i want you
i want you here in my home
i want you to here

Your eyes captivate
Your body stimulates
Your smile melts me
you dance like the wind

As i watch you
I open a cold one
As i watch you
I feel at rest
As i watch you
My agony disappears
As i watch you
You are the best
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Old 12-21-2006, 10:00 PM
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No, don't you worry. Before long your smile will return,
And the fire in your chest will cool. No, don't you worry.

Oh I swear. There is no limits to my feelings.
I'm head over heels in love.
Every moment with you, I'm renewed. Don't you worry.

I recall that night I confessed my love.
Tears fell down your cheeks,
But I never meant for that. Don't you worry.
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"Such a shame to believe in escape
A life on every face
And that's a change, till I'm finally left with an eight
Tell me to react, I just stare
Maybe I don't know if I should change
A feeling that we share...
It's a shame
(Such a shame)
Number me with rage, it's a shame
(Such a shame)
Number me in haste, it's a shame
This eagerness to change
It's a shame..."
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Old 12-22-2006, 12:45 AM
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Wow Atra, your poetry is so beautiful and touching. Never hesitate to post it, because it is fully worth revealing.
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