[Poem] not so much Amazing

[atra201]

Tell me something, anything.
Say you love me,
Or say you hate me.

Speak and don't worry about a thing.
Say that you want me.
Or what has brought you here?
Just say anything,
Anything my darling.

I never got used to
Having you with me,
And having you worry by yourself.


Never. We have become One heart
That beats for you and for me.

And oh my heart,
Oh my life,
Tell me what's wrong?
Why are you quiet?
Why?

Speak my heart,
Speak my life,
Tell me what are you hiding from me?
What?

Just say anything,
Anything my darling.

If you feel I have wronged you,
Tell the world and blame me.
And if you find that you were to blame,
I will still gladly take it.
I will still gladly take it.
Gladly.


Speak my heart,
Speak my life,
Tell me what are you hiding from me?

Tell me something, anything.
Tell me something, anything.
Say you love me,
Or say you hate me.

Every word, every touch,
My soul always keeps it for you.
Every tear, every joy,
I always run to tell you about it.

Speak, speak.
Speak and don't worry about a thing.
Say that you want me.
Or what has brought you here?
Just say anything,
Anything my darling.

[atra201]

Amazing.
Her style was amazing.
Her style was amazing.

Her smile tricked me,
And her tears fooled me.
And her tears fooled me.

And I would have never believed
Before this day,
That my feelings,
Until now, would stay.

I knew her,
As much as I knew her,
But I didn't know her at all.

And I saw her,
As much as I saw her,
But I didn't understand her at all.

She used to say she loved me,
Yes, she used to say.
And from my unwary heart,
I believed, believed her right away.

I used to see, hear,
And feel her heart.
I was living, not for me.
But only for her.

Oh you who taught me love,
I wish I never learned it with you,
Or even saw it.

Why have you left me?
Did you let me forget the world,
And live in your beauty.

There was not another pair like us.
That saw what we saw in our love.

We used to begin our dreams,
Then complete them from each other.

Why did you wake me
From amidst heaven
To fire, fire and tears.

You should have had mercy
And leave me a while
To live, live asleep.

My heart, tell love to
Get out of my way.

If I befriend a loyal heart,
I won't trust it or nourish it.
And if she smiles at me I'll laugh.
And trick her and maybe betray her.

Like others have sold us out,
Let's sell out the life of love,
And it's promise.

Like my heart was lost,
Let all of the worlds hearts be lost,
After mine.

Or on second thought,
No, my heart.
Why should we blame love?

He who betrayed you,
Betrayed love as well.

So I, and love and you,
Were just a game,
Just a game between her hands.

[Canuck]

i wrote one as well

The sky on a perfect day is nothing compared to what I see in her eyes,
As I fall helplessly into a comforting, warm trance every time I look into them.
Neither sunsets or sunrises can compare to how beautiful she is,
and all the stars in the night sky could never twinkle as bright as her smile.
but its that smile that takes me to the clearest state of mind,
but it seems I find myself lost in my thoughts.
You illuminate my universe….

[atra201]

Originally Posted by Canuck

i wrote one as well

The sky on a perfect day is nothing compared to what I see in her eyes,
As I fall helplessly into a comforting, warm trance every time I look into them.
Neither sunsets or sunrises can compare to how beautiful she is,
and all the stars in the night sky could never twinkle as bright as her smile.
but its that smile that takes me to the clearest state of mind,
but it seems I find myself lost in my thoughts.
You illuminate my universe….

well said She illuminates our universe

[aliquis_venum]

This song is composed by one of my country's most popular balladeer. I dedicate this song to Alizee -

YOU ARE MY SONG

You are the song
Playing so softly in my heart
I reach for you
You seem so near
And yet so far
I hope and I pray
You'll be with me someday
I know down inside
That you are mine & I'm your true love
Or am I dreaming...

How can I
Each time I try to say goodbye
You were there
You look my way and touch the sky
We can share tomorrow and forevermore
I'll be there
To love you so
You are my song

I know for sure
That we were meant to fall in love
I look in your eyes
I know what you're thinking of
I try not to say
The words that might just scare you away
I know down inside
That you are mine & I'm your true love
Please, no more dreaming...

How can I
Each time I try to say goodbye
You were there
You look my way and touch the sky
We can share tomorrow and forevermore
I'll be there
To love you so
You are my song

Maybe we can last until forever
And I know that we can make it through
With you in my heart, in my soul, you're my love
You're my song

You are my song

We can share tomorrow and forevermore
I'll be there
To love you so
You are my song


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[CFHollister]

aliquis_venum, please use normal sized text... huge pet peeve of mine.

[atra201]

In return for the love that you see in my eyes,
Greet me, oh beautiful one.
How many times do my eyes ask for you?
How many times am I tortured?

I'm afraid you'd listen to gossip and I'd be lost.
I show others the way to heaven, but I'm in fire.

You are precious to me and you've made me crazy.
Have pity on me and stop torturing me!

I've stayed up nights, and I wish that sleep
Would have found its way to my eyes.
And that which I hid, I quickly found
Was obvious to see, obvious to see.

I wasted my precious youth.
I found your name in love.
And when I pictured you in my future.
I pictured you as beautiful as possible.

You are precious to me and you've made me crazy.
Have pity on me and stop torturing me!


I'm patient, but the days of my life keep passing,
And I've forgotten my soul.
I've lost my life.
And what have I gained? Pain and agony.


My tears of sacrifice, have burrowed my cheeks.
In my black nights,
I stay quiet and hide, but stay faithful in my love.
Keeping my dreams alive, keeping my dreams alive.

[atra201]

Love came to us,
And it captured us,

And her eyelashes,
Trapped me in love.

So love captured us and we surrendered.
And he who trapped us shall set us free.

'Cause she is always on my mind.
Oh good lord, always on my mind.

You, who has captured me with your eyes,
Why not tell me where we are headed?

To a new wound?
Or nowhere at all?
Or are you leading me finally to happiness?

Why do I ask?
Why am I so worried.
One day time will tell.

So let us keep on walking the path.


Let us pass, sweet love, let us pass.
To the entrance of forever, lead us.

My life is with her.
And my love is her.

Let's go, you who has forgotten our path,

And the stars of the sky will embrace us,
And take us far away together.


Remember us, remember us,
Oh love, remember us.
And try not to hurt us.


And bring us closer, don't tear us apart.
And bring us joy with our beloved.

And if love sweeps us away,
we'll finally be relieved.

So let us keep on walking the path.

[Canuck]

Originally Posted by atra201

Love came to us,
And it captured us,

And her eyelashes,
Trapped me in love.

So love captured us and we surrendered.
And he who trapped us shall set us free.

'Cause she is always on my mind.
Oh good lord, always on my mind.

You, who has captured me with your eyes,
Why not tell me where we are headed?

To a new wound?
Or nowhere at all?
Or are you leading me finally to happiness?

Why do I ask?
Why am I so worried.
One day time will tell.

So let us keep on walking the path.


Let us pass, sweet love, let us pass.
To the entrance of forever, lead us.

My life is with her.
And my love is her.

Let's go, you who has forgotten our path,

And the stars of the sky will embrace us,
And take us far away together.


Remember us, remember us,
Oh love, remember us.
And try not to hurt us.


And bring us closer, don't tear us apart.
And bring us joy with our beloved.

And if love sweeps us away,
we'll finally be relieved.

So let us keep on walking the path.

mann you got so much talent You should be a lyricist!

[Amelie]

soooo beautiful...create a song for me please...