possible donation opportunity? - Page 23

lefty12357 · #**221** 08-08-2011, 10:48 PM

Looks pretty good. By the way, did we end up with €1000?

User22 · #**222** 08-08-2011, 10:51 PM

AHHH!!! My english skills must budge in right now! Sorry

Quote:

Originally Posted by BrianO1

So is this good??:

Good day,

First, I must mention that we are sorry for directly involving Alizée. We tried our best to find other ways to make our donation.

The members of AlizéeAmerica would like to thank Alizée for letting us partake in helping the young child we know as John-Baptiste. We have not forgotten the wonderful gift Alizée gave us, of a private autograph session in March of 2010. This is our way of saying thank you for everything Alizée has done for us, her fans in the USA, and around the globe.

Please send me a PayPal bill in the amount of €X,XXX to (email) and I will see that the money is sent to you. Thank you again for everything and we wish you the best.

Cordially,

Dave Hardy
AlizéeAmerica

It has to be:

This is our way of saying thank you for everything Alizée has done for us fans in the USA and around the globe.

______________

because if you took out the ", her fans in the USA," it would come out to be:

This is our way of saying thank you for everything Alizée has done for us and around the globe.

which doesn't make sense. So i reccomend my version of that sentence to retain proper english. please don't take it as me putting down anyone's english.

Edit:

Yeah we did Lefty

Thanks to Brian whipping out the extra 100 euros needed to top it off

lefty12357 · #**223** 08-08-2011, 10:54 PM

I agree Aaron, it sounds better.

BrianO1 · #**224** 08-08-2011, 10:54 PM

Well honestly, Scruffy did a great job with the first message, and it was good enough to get a response...so...I say we just let Scruffy work his magic again

Scruffydog777 · #**225** 08-08-2011, 10:56 PM

I can't think straight any more.
There were 2 possible additional donors.
That's why I'd like to wait until at least wednesday or maybe even thursday to send the money. In the mean time, I could send a post saying basicly, as soon as I have recieved all the donations by mail, I will provide you my e.mail address ( they should already have it), so you can send me a bill via paypal.

lefty12357 · #**226** 08-08-2011, 10:56 PM

What do you think Scruffy? Do you like it?

BrianO1 · #**227** 08-08-2011, 10:58 PM

yeah, right now...I think all of our minds are blown.

We have a few days to come up with a good message, dont worry about it right now.

User22 · #**228** 08-08-2011, 10:58 PM

Like Brian said, take over Scruff and work your magic!

And you can always send the 2 donations late since you will have her team's paypal address. I know it sounds tacky but it's best if we don't wait that long.

lefty12357 · #**229** 08-08-2011, 10:59 PM

OK. I think Scruffy is right though. It would be a good idea to let them know more money is coming in and that's the reason for the delay.

User22 · #**230** 08-08-2011, 10:59 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by BrianO1

yeah, right now...I think all of our minds are blown.

I'm still foamely ecstatic that she even replied....SHE REPLIED!!!